“Now what do
I need?” David mumbled miserably. He was the most forgetful person ever; in
fact he held the world record for it!
Every day he’ll walk to his local convenience store, as soon as he steps
foot inside, he’d forget everything. It gets worse and worse everyday. People
often wonder what the matter is. Everybody knows his unusual catch phrase- now,
what do I need?
Suddenly,
the very next day, David’s unknown memory came crawling back to him. He could
now remember things from years ago! Happiness filled David right to the top…
his life was now complete!
David needs Simon in his arms! RIGHT NOW! :p
ReplyDeleteGreat idea Charlotte. You used a lot of the power punctuation but be careful.
ReplyDeletePS Who is Simon, did I miss something?
Charlotte, this is a interesting piece of writing, thank-you for entering it into the 100 Word Challenge. You have used the prompt in a interesting way and David sounds like a fascinating character. You have used exclamation marks for effect correctly and have also included some dialogue.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Mrs Stones (Team 100WC)