And the winner is...Stripes, the pink tiger from Africa!"I've never been so proud of being pink,Finally its paid off.", exclaimed Stripes jubilantly.
His prizes were,:a marvellous tropie, a small castle and a mini helicopter that flew around the stage until Stripes was announced winner and then the mini helicopter came over to him.
Noisily the band started playing and everyone began to celebrate,and lots of animals came to congratulate Stripes!Because of this Stripes became very popular that day ,and, Stripes got free drinks and food,how nice!
Also,Stripes was very happy indeed,Stripes had lots of fun!
Much better Charlotte. I'm starting to understand what happened now. Try not to use the name so much. You repeat the word Stripes a lot.
ReplyDeleteGood uplevelling.