Thursday 3 May 2012

100wc week #29 Jack Heaton

Do you want to win a cool million. Well now you can simply be the last man/woman standing. You will be equipped only with simple weapons. Furthermore your challenge takes place in front of the castle up the road from the pink candy shop. Sign up now and be involved with the battle that flew up the live charts. Last year many people noisily engaged in the marauding battle now its your turn. Remember some things are worst than death, sometimes even living...

By Jack Heaton
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3 comments:

  1. Scott Howard3 May 2012 at 20:26

    hunger games i did somthing like that great minds think alike o and sign me up ;]

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  2. Anonymous8 May 2012 at 09:34

    this is epic!!! comment on mine.

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  3. jatwood49 May 2012 at 02:51

    Hi, Jack. This is quite an adventurous opening for a story! You used some great action phrases, and your story flowed along well. Watch out for punctuation. You could add a little here and boost up the adventure even more -- pauses with commas is a good place to start.

    Great 100WC!

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