Thursday 18 July 2013

100WC Daniel

As I look up at the heavens for hope, I cry in despair I know she was dead, the doctors face said it all, she then laid a sheet over her and left.

I lay motionless on the road looking up at the starless sky, suddenly I hear sirens, I stand up and look around, I can't because my eyes are watering, I then hear screeching I clear my eyes, fire! a ambulance had swerved to avoid me but crashed.

The fire spread quickly, I wondered what I would do I rushed in it's empty, but one doctor the one who tried to save my wife, I garaged her out of the fire...

                                                                 by Daniel

Callum-100WC

Callum

100 WC



My mothers heart rate machine was beeping constantly. This was the moment I dreaded-finally her heart had stopped.

My Mum had been on her way to China for business however she was late consequently she crashed because she was going to fast.

I swung my head down and clutched her hand; a tear trickled down my distraught face. A couple of days later her funeral was announced, she was burried. A week later I realized that my Mum was going to give me her magic necklace.

A year later I visited her grave, but I wondered what I would do. 

Owen-WC

It was raining I was driving curiously about the wet roads.

In the distance I saw smoke gradually I emerged closer to investigate. As I got closer I heard a BANG! in amongst the car.

There was a thump. I hit the car. I was trembling in fear. In one blink I spun into a factory.

I was unconscious. I was trying to think but  there was a deadly tiring in my brain.

I saw a shadow appear in the distance, who was it? But I wondered what to do.

1000wc

                                 100 wc


I’d lived in a Childrens home all my life, me, my sister and the other.

One day baby arrived on that same day an indescribable thing happened, the house collapsed! I don’t know what happened the roof collapsed I had been by the door. Going along the corridor I realised my sister was up stairs but then I heard a crying the young baby! Quickly I remembered my sister but what would I do if nobody saved her, I’d blame myself so with a terrifying beat in my heart and a soft pounding in my head. I made the decision and one split second later the door opposite exploded, BANG!    

100WC-Steven

He knelled next to his mother, cradling her motionless arm as he mourned for his mum to cling to life again, the doctor payed her respects and there was an eerie silence apart from the beeping noise I'd dreaded all my life. She was gone.

He headed outside and sat on the road holding himself to maintain his composure, then he heard a noise, a siren, it was an ambulance heading towards me. I smiled at it, thinking that it would hit me, sending me to the sky's with my mother, however it swerved and drove straight into the hospital sending petrol everywhere, cascading into the hospital, creating a fire.

I hurried into the building and saw a nurse and a baby, but I wondered what I would do, save the baby or the nurse?

Maalis 100 word challeng

Dear diary,

                     Today Stefan was captured. My eyes burned as I cried. At that moment I chose to go rescue him. Even-though it threatened my life, he was like a brother to me, I couldn't stand him being caught, but I wondered what I would do I was just a new born vampire, what could I do? I received a ransom note saying were he was and how much I needed to pay but I decided to save him. As I arrived I jumped into the room inuring my leg Stefan grabbed me. He pulled me out, safe.    

lily 100wc

Flames flickering in the corners of my eyes, thoughts of fear echoing. Laughs of fire transformed into constant cries from my mother.

I froze, couldn't move, my mum's body on the carpet i felt a sudden erge we had to get out, alive!

I knew I would be ok. But would mum? Doctors surrounding me; I sat up rapidly,"Get off me!" I screeched."I want to see my mum!"

The dreaded everlasting beep as her eyes fell closed. My mother lying still, I gripped her hand tightly and cradled it to her heart. She was motionless and I was frightend and alone. Now no father and no mother!

Jennifer's 100 word challenge

Jennifer loves exploring  climbing up trees but  today i wondered into a huge open mansion.

Just then i saw a  ghostly figure taking me by surprise. I  couldn't  move it was hurting me.I could hear ghosts all around screaming  about.

"Now Jennifer" whispered the figure. "h how do you know my name" i said frighted he'd take my life."i'm closer than you think" 
 "ARR AH one knife came out I wondered what i would do.

Just then bang,bang .The police were Knocking down the door. "Hands up our I'll gas you"screamed a police man your under arrest and i never went exploring again.




100wc-Kelsie

Living in an orphanage is like being imprisoned in my own suffering shadow wishing to be let free.


But that one fateful night when the sky had no stars I knew it was time. Time to leave this terror-stricken place.I went.

Horror awoke as I fell upon a mystery that came upon me to solve it, there. Laying stealthily a boy. Crying for urgent help.But what would I do?

Desperate but angry voices coming closer every second of every minute. I dived into a bush.OUCH!A thorn has pieced through my painful skin.

My vision blurred miraculously I hear voices. Then someone saying my name. I fond myself in hospital.

Sophie's 100wc



The doctor told me but he needn't have, because the monitor of my mothers heart rate was beeping constantly.
 This was the moment  I dreaded. That was then, I wondered what I would do without her. But then, just then, I realised that i could do nothing about her death either.

She was motionless. Tears trickled down my desrought face. My heart shattered into one thousand pieces.

I clutched her hand in despair. She was 72, I knew she would die but i didn't expect it this early.

The next day was her funeral, I sobbed. As I went over to the coffin I slowly saw it opening by itself.
Just then a the same hand as my mother came out. What was happening?

faith 100 wc


I was there the day my mum died, why did she die especially on my sisters 1st birthday? She’s also in hospital she may die too! The last noise I herd of her was beeeep that’s when I knew she was gone! I had to rush outside.

As I screamed loudly I cried on the grass the tears fell down. A car came racing round the corner it only just saw me it dogged me but hit 3 ambulances and they exploded into flames! But I wondered what I would to do! Do I save my sister? What happens now?...

100 word challenge.

The expression on the doctors face explained every thing.Cradling his hand in painful despair, the memories came flooding back.The long and tiring beep echoed around the room.Then a deadly silence...

With streams or water dripping  down my lonely face, i threw my hands up to the dark skies above.But i wondered what to do, i had lost him, my brother and best friend.

We had spent all our lives together as we were twins.A crushendo of shattered hearts spat through my motionless body.This is it, my chance to change.Forever.  

100-WC ~ Sam

One day in 1970 I bought a house, Naish house.

A week after I met the love of my life. We lived happily and had children, Jack, Lucy and Harriet.

Christmas day in 1985 a maid came running down from the tower shouting “the towers on fire, the towers on fire.”

Later that day I woke up in hospital. That was when it struck me, I had passed out from all the smoke. Luckily the doctor exclaimed I could go. 


I went to see my wife. I saw her numb. But I wondered what to do there was only me. 

100 word challenge by Shannon

Elly stopped and stared she looked at the hospital she was really shocked it was an inferno!

I ran in the hospital and looked left and right but I wondered where everyone was.

I opened the brown door then I saw a little girl she was sobbing and terrified! But I wondered what I would do.

Then I had a tremendous Idea! I thought because the little girl is really scared and crying I should take her outside so I  picked up the little girl and ran outside!


The fire people came and they got all the hose pipe out 

100wc- Mal

I clutched her hand in agony. The doctors expression told it all. A noise I had dreaded all my life sounded.

It was unbearable. I fell on the floor outside in despair. I heard sirens. It's engine got louder. The ambulance dodged me. But then went into the hospital.

It went into a fire ball. The hospital started to burn. I had a choice. Babies were screaming or I could save the doctor that helped my mum but i wondered what i would do.

I chose to save the doctor. She was very grateful and was completely honored for it.

100wc by Annie webb

100wc

Everyone in the orphanage made me feel imprisoned in my own shadow.Their treatment was like an arrow piercing my heart.That was until...


I felt boxed in this coffin which was enclosing. Sometimes I cower in a dark, damp corner away from the bullys.My eye lids fall shut and this feeling starts to eat away at my soul I wondered what I would do to lose this horrible nightmare of darkness.


Suddenly the agonizing pain shoots me in the gut, everything becomes real. In a blink of an eye my life was over...


By
Annie Webb


100 word challenge~ Lauren.

I knelt next to my dying mother. With blood spurting out of her, she whispered her last words, taking her last breaths. Clenching her cold, motionless hand gently, a shiver trickled down her spine. These were her last moments.

As I turned away from this sorrowful moment, I saw an ambulance approaching. Just as it was about to hit me, it swerved right towards the hospital. I had a vivid idea but I wondered what I would do.

My pregnant sister was at one ward and my wounded, crying aunt was at the other. Choice took over me. Who would I choose?

100wc by kayleigh

Forest rest rescue.


I was only 4 when it happened! I was stranded alone before I was 5. I was happy  alone.I wandered into the deep  dark  forest but as i turned back my life felt closed. Sobbing ,lost, alone, in despair everything  hitting me at once.
As explorers came I asked for help but  as I turn 15 one last try. Before I had that chance they carelessly set my home/forest  alight.

I had two choose run and make the memories flow back or save everything in the forest then run but i wondered what i would do...    

100 word challenge by Abbey

                                      forest rescue

  
 It was just a normal day in the forest next door to my house. Then it happened. The firer started by careless explorers. I ran to the edge of the forest as soon as  heard the terrified cries of the helpless animals. The fire was still quite far away. I could make it. I wondered what i would do. Without thinking, I dashed into the waist high shrubs. I screamed at the birds, waving my arms wildly to make them fly to safety. I scooped up the baby monkeys that had got lost in shock. The blazing flames toured over me...    

Matthew Smith-100 Word Challenge

The bell went CLANG! I ran for my life, it was the holidays and I was going to the park with my friend. I was so excited, I ran to the park to make sure I wasn't late. But then it struck me where was I?

I started panicking I tried retracing my steps but I couldn't. But I wondered what I would do. I could not survive, I started shouting; but there was no answer. I was lost on my own.

I started getting thirsty , my breath was fading, I knew this was the end. I closed my eyes...  


100-WC By Thomas Devaney Brundall Primary School

The doctors expression told everything. I ( Jack) fell on the floor. Why did this have to happen.
My mum was no more...

I burst out the door. But I wondered what I would do. So I lay on the road. Suddenly in the corner of my eye an ambulance came towards me.

It swerved away from me into the hospital. What had I done.

I rushed in. The doctor who tried to save mum was on the floor. I jumped and pulled her out.

She lay there. Another motionless woman this time my fault. I now sat there all alone.

Tuesday 9 July 2013

Norfolk Children's Book Festival

During last week, the Dodos and i went to the Norfolk Children's Book Festival. The day was very eventful and was full of surprises.

Whilst we were travelling, we didn't have a clue who we were going to see. For this reason there was suspense going all around us. We were absolutely buzzing to find out.

Kjartan Poskitt was my favorite author. He was crazy and interesting with his tricks. In one particular trick he made a yellow and green hexagon go spotty. I was mystified by how he did it.

By the end we were amazed by what the authors did but we were slightly exhausted from the long day.

By Mal Staff

Norfolk children's book festival

Excitement buzzed as our exhilarating emotions were imprisoned by the double decker bus. Every soul couldn't sit still as shivers tickled down our spines in discomposure.

To my amazement there stood in front of me, when I got there, five of the most creative authors with books that ranged from maths to poetry.

As a result I brought two books which from the second I read the blurb I felt beckoned to read more.

Overall the annual children's book festival was a magical event which captured the imagination of millions of young writers.  



                                                          By Annie webb
                                  The Norfolk children's book festival was an amazing and fun day. I really loved the book sighing as when I bought Helen Dennis' book I wanted to get it signed quickly. the book festival was outstanding the helpers were very polite and the ice cream van was an unusual treat. I really enjoyed the day at Norfolk children' book festival and I hope I can attend again. I loved the day at Norwich. 
                      By Bryony .A. Jarman.

Norfolk book festival

 At the Norfolk book festival all of the authors were brilliant.But in my opinion Tom Bowler was best.
He was cleaver to leave the story he was reading on a cliff hanger so it was obviously the book a lot of people wanted to buy. I have just finished reading one of his books called buried thunder. It was scary and fascinating! I am currently reading the book he left on a massive cliff hanger. The book is called storm catchers. It is quite scary but in the end...Well you have to find out by reading it.

Matthew Smith-100 Word Challenge

On Wednesday the 3rd of July the dominating Dodos went to the Norfolk children's book festival, once we got there we met several book authors called: Helen Dennis, Craig Simpson, Tim Bowler, Kjartan Poskitt and finally Molly Naylor. In between them we had short little breaks so we could get ice cream and books, that we could get signed by the authors!

There was also a amazing poetry author that read out her fascinating poems, at the start of the poetry she told us how to be a poetry audience!

Jennifer 1000 word challenge

Firstly we had to sit down quietly and patiently to watch Helen Dennis.She wrote a book called the secret breakers it's about a book that was found 500 years ago and 3 children try to break  codes.


The second speaker was Craig Simpson who writes war stories However i have not finished it yet.

Tim Bowler was next he was my favourite speaker he wrote a book called Storm catchers which i have finished it's about a girl who's name is Ella and she got kidnapped from her own house. 

Lastly we have Kjartan poskitt he wrote murderous maths on the telly in the marquee he ran up to the camera and pulled a funny face.

Norfolk children's book festival

The annual Norfolk children's book festival fascinated me on books i would never necessarily choose. The day was filled with inspiring authors in the range from maths books, story's,poetry and much more. Also amazing books and guaranteed everyone would have a intriguing book tht suits them.

I would recommend this joyful festival to anyone any age if they want a variety of adventurous authors explaining what they like and books you might fancy reading! This oppertunity has widened my tatse in different types of stories. Overall the day was fabulous and a plus bonus, the ice cream was delicious!

By BICKERS

Monday 8 July 2013

This Battle



All:                       This is the end
Good people:      Of the darkness in this land
Bad People:         Feel our force moving in
                             Movements bright…
Good:                  …And torches light
                             You will see light again
Bad:                     Darkness will rule ‘til the end
All:                       This battle will seek our fate
Good:                  Light will always overtake

Chorus
Children:             In this battle,
                             We will not fall,
                             We will stand tall,
                             And face it all, together
                             (repeat)

All:                       This battle where’s we start
                             One hundred light,
                             But a thousand dark

Isidore:                My army is strong and brave

Bad:                     You may be brave but we‘ll take your hearts and turn them dark.

Chorus



All:                       Where you go I go
                             What you see I see,
                             I know I’d never be me
                             Without this security
                             Of your loving arms
Keeping me from harm
Put your hand in my hand
                             And we’ll stand

Chorus
All:                        In this battle,
                             We will not fall,
                             We will stand tall,
                             And face it all, together
                             (repeat)


Tuesday 2 July 2013

Your bad actions will always come back to haunt you


I have always regretted the night when I left my two children, Alice and Jodie alone that evening. Why was I so stupid? I knew that they were only 10 & 12 but I thought that they would listen to me when I told them to keep the door locked and not answer it to anybody.

When I first came in that night at 2:37am I fell to the floor at an instant. My eyes filled with tears. They ran down my face as fast as a river flowed. My heart shattered into one thousand pieces. I sat there. I tried to scream but it felt as if I had lost my voice. 

There they were Jodie hanging upside down with her eyeball hanging by the thread and Alice, lying on the floor with her neck pouring out with blood and a knife in th stomach. It was the most horrible sight I had ever witnessed and the most horrible I would witnessed .

It was that moment when I realised that it was karma. Earlier that month, on August 2nd, I had murdered someone not just anyone, my sister. She was always getting what she wanted and my parents where always proud of her, never me. I felt so good inside when she died but now I regret it. 

That evening I was driving to the police when I saw a shadow in the back of my car. I suddenly came to a slow stop. My fuel had run out. I got scared at an instant. I went to check out the shadow. Aaaarrrrrggggg! It jumped straight out at me with a knife. It slit my neck open. Was this my sister coming back for me?