Thursday 30 April 2015

Christina 100wc

My heart began pounding like a drum.
Sweat was pouring down my face like a waterfall.
I jumped in fear as I stood on a cornflake that was spilt on the floor.
Sneaking around the house searching for the beast. But for some reason i was finding it exciting!
Then, out of the blue, an eye blinked in the shadows and i froze. The bloodthirsty lion pounced
as i ran in fear. I think I was so scared it looked like I danced to the flat door.
His claws slit my throat as blood poured out rapidly.

“SOMEONE HELP”

daisy 100 wc

Daisy 100 wc


Not long ago, Tally would be inside her own home with her family. Not now, not after her parents had died.Tally was living on the streets with only her toy lion for company. Every morning the drummers would wake her up by beating their drum right by her ear. As they danced along the street, Tally felt a tear drop, it reminded her of her family. She decided to find some breakfast. She found a cornflake cake in the bin by the bench where she always sat. She thought about how it was made. How exciting it  must have been.

Evan Eleven's 100 WC

Surprisingly, it was very quiet at the zoo, everyone was dancing in a pure white tent. Also, listening to zoo keepers playing a song on the drum that I recognised. After seconds of daydreaming, in the corner of my eye, I noticed an empty cage. “What was inside?”
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I went to have a closer look, at the name on the information panel. It read Cornflake lion. There called Cornflake lions for their unique Cornflake-shaped tail.
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Amazingly, I noticed eyes staring at me, as if they were piercing into my heart giving me an exciting feeling. Best zoo trip ever!
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chloes 100 word challenge

chloe 100 word challenge

“Sam, Charlie we’ve got to go to the airport.” Their mum warned.
They were all going on an exciting trip to Turkey. Everyone hopped in the car and drove off.

“boarding flight Thirteen to Turkey, Alanya.” With a flash the Thompsons fell asleep on the plane. By four hours passing , they landed and realised that Sam and Charlie had disappeared.

“Charlie!” Mum screeched.
“Sam!” Dad bellowed.
One minute they were there, one minute they’re gone.

“Kidnapped” Mum wondered. She sobbed for a while. Her children, gone, forever. They heard Lions roar and screams.

People were forced to dance, cornflakes crunched.

Catherine 100 WC

‘Rick!’ I shout, ‘ be quiet!’ He doesn’t listen.
Rick is addicted to his precious drums, always practising. I don’t know what’s exciting about it, though, all you do is bang it. Rick is so annoying! The thudding continued like a lion preparing to dance. Fed up, I trudge down stairs and get the cornflakes. Suddenly, a loud bang makes me drop them, spilling all over the floor. But, I spot a note lingering on the table. It says:


‘What are brothers for?

I smile, realising it doesn’t matter that he annoying, that’s what brothers are for

100 word challenge

                                           

Driving along the dusty path I quickly wake up and realise we made it, Africa. Packed in my backpack I sneaked an emergency ration of Cornflakes home. Ahead I notice a rabble of dancers, a large man is beating the drum, the people dance until my eyes hurt. Eventually we decided to offer them a ride.

 Surprised I see a Lion pounce on top of our van. I remember the emergency Cornflakes packed in my bag. Assuringly I hurl the food out the window.

We drive up to the Hotel, I creep up the stairs open the door, full of Mosquitoes how exciting.

100 wc

                          Kidnapped!!!!!



Steve was jolted awake by a noise. The lights outside his room flickered on and off.
Suddenly, men entered his room. They hit him on the head and he fell into unconsciousness…

When Steve regained consciousness, he knew something was wrong. He was in a cage with a bowl. Inside the bowl was a single, disgusting cornflake.

The next day, the men returned. They held a sack. His door was swung open, and the contents of the sack were emptied. Steve’s heart beated like a drum. A lion. It danced. The moment was exciting, yet strange.
What was going on?

Alone

Here I am, my brand new house, brand new doors, brand new windows, brand new cornflakes - which I bought at budgens - brand new car, brand new bed… brand new life. Alone. I edged slowly over to the lorry where my belongings waited to be introduced to the house. In the corner of my eye, a neighbour danced to Rihanna. An adorable lion toy watches her, but looked tattered. I veered to my door, I knew this place was exciting, but I was alone. Suddenly, a drum started banging, probably the neighbours. Will they be friendly? I wondered and hoped I was not alone.

The war



I sat cautiously in my Jeep. Today was not an exciting day. The war is commencing. The sound of gunshots ringed in my ear-drums. I was already half offering surrender, but I knew I had to lead my army. When I got to my army camp, some people danced, ready for the event, and other people crying, shaking in their boots. I had a bowl of cornflakes to get my appetite up. After, I got in place in front of everybody else. Knowing that this was a fatal risk. I held a patriotic flag with 3 lions. It had started.
Casually I strolled down the frosted street of Gigg lane it was a sight for sore eyes.

All of a sudden I connected with an exciting feeling .An isolated lion danced at the unfamiliar sight of a human. Gradually closing in on the lion, my heart was beating like a drum.In the corner of my eye I noticed a bizzare cornflake floating in the motionless air.It was followed by another,then another until it became a continious theme . An unsatisfactory feeling drifted into my body as the lion leapt on to my static chest.And showed his teeth...

James 100 WC 2


Danny woke up.His scarred heart was pounding like a drum.He took a spoonful of cornflakes from his mosaic bowl,to get ready for the battle of a lifetime.Behind him his greatest childhood memories turning to flames.From a distance he could see the golden fur lion,scars all over him.Danny took out his sword,carved to perfection.The beast jumped at him like an elegant horse,Danny plunged the sword in the lions beating heart.It was over.All the fighting,done.Danny danced this was exciting stuff. Then a growl was heard.Was it all over?

WC 2 No one home

No one home

I walked. The cornflakes I had had obviously filled me up, as it was now noon and I haven’t eaten since.
The hall, in which I walked, was neverending, but doors led off into separate rooms.
Door 21. I took out my key, unlocked the door and went in. My drum still sat there, unused. The wall is painted with lions, where they once danced.
I took out the tape, showing my 8th birthday, and pushed it into my TV. My face appeared on the scratched screen. “ This is so exciting!” I cried.

But my parents aren't here to give me presents anymore. They’re dead...

100wc -_-

As the drums beat and the crowd roars, the lions are released and the warriors fight for their lives.
“How amusing,” said the Emperor.
“indeed,” replied his slave.
“Let the ceremony commence!” shouted the Emperor.
“Slave pour the semi-skimmed milk onto the exiting  cornflakes.”
“Yes my lord.”
As the lady slaves danced, the Emperor ate a few cornflakes before saying…
“These are a disgrace, put them with the lions!”
“But all of the lions are dead.”
“Then feed them to someone elses lions!”
“Would… would you errr.. mind if I had some?” said the slave.
“No!”



By Levi Mark Standley

Thursday 23 April 2015

Matthew 100 word challange

THE CHASE

My arms and legs were moving rapidly like a hurricane, as I hurtled along the pavement. I couldn't lose him . My only choice was to head for the forest. The legs trees tried to trip me, their arms tried to grab me. I ran past them like a deer. Suddenly I stopped. I looked into the  dark forest and saw  nothing but trees staring back at me.Down at my feet, an x marks the spot where I stood.Before I realised this was his plan, a knife speared through me and there I was lying in my own blood.

Yacob Zainab 100 WC

                     X MARKS THE SPOT


Gazing down at the pirate map I notice a small patch of red on the mountain.X marks the spot! Eagerly Jeff climbed the jagged tree and noticed the mountain, as quick as a flash Jeff sprinted to Mount Chilly. Peering into the cave Jeff noticed a pair of blood red eyes peering at him with deep hatred Suddenly Jeff got picked up by the horrible beast and got slung in a dark smelly cage with a Rat in the corner! Quickly Jeff noticed that he was sitting on top of an x marks the spot he dug and hit a chest!

morganne 100 word challenge


Annie was excited. She was warming up for her biggest ever competition of 2015. Finally she entered the gymnasium. There were three judges sitting in a row, and then she saw an ‘X’ that marks the spot she was to stand on and wait until she heard a beeping noise. Annie started her routine with a simple Arial, she flipped up into the air, as she did this she felt her heart go faster and faster by the minute. What was happening. By the time she had finished her routine she had forgotten all about her worries about her heart.

Tom 100wc

the dusty trenches
inside the deadly battlefield, blood was oozing down my neck whilst haunting gun shots were skimming past my ear. Danger awaits. I was sweating ferociously.

My only friend was struck by a stray bullet. Taking my metal helmet off in disgust I said a solemn prayer as I buried him in the gruesome trenches: x marks the spot where my tears fell on his grave.

I was dehydrated because there was no water to stop me from fainting.
Feeling like a rollercoaster,I became dizzy.Struggling ,lost, through no-mans-land the situation over came me, and i fainted...

Abbi 100 wc

I froze. The bushes around me were rustling, but it wasn't the weather.
“Who’s there?” I called.
No answer.
Murmurs echoed around me, seemingly saying that X marks the spot. Gradually, I started to sprint, doing whatever I could to escape the voices. Suddenly, I skidded to a halt. There on the ground, was a red X. Remembering what the voices said, I hastily constructed a shovel and began to dig. Inside the hole, I saw what looked like a portal. Cautiously, I jumped through it.
Once I got through, I grinned. I was the first  person to ever escape the maze.
Malachai's 100w challenge
X marks the spot

Edward sat there, sitting on the river bank. He knew he wasn’t loved and that he would never be liked. No family. No friends. Just himself. The suicidal thoughts still lingering in his brain. Ever since the death of his mother he had been alone, counting the days since the horrible event. But at that very moment he saw something glimmer, a huge black X covered the object. “X marks the spot” his mother always told him. He dug and dug and had the metal object. Inside the glass window was a picture of him and his beloved mother.

Lee Lee 100 WC

Emma was sweating like mad, she was new to the NHS. Her first day. Her first operation. It was on a four year old girl called Angela, if Emma failed to do the operation Angela would die. Emma panicked she didn't know where to inject Angela, Suddenly Emma realised she had ten seconds left… Emma found some notes left for her that said X marks the spot. “ of course!” Emma shrieked her scar that looks like an X. She had two seconds left… Emma had done it,saved Angela, Emma was so proud. She couldn’t wait to share the good news.

Evan Eleven's 100 word challenge X Marks The Spot

                          X Marks The Spot


It was pouring down with rain, as Ben munched down his dinner, like a pirate spending all his precious treasure. Minutes later, after the greedy boy scoffed down his pudding, he was sent to brush his teeth and quietly climb into bed. later that night, Ben dreamed about a gigantic three-headed Beast in the plain desert of Egypt. The only possible thing poor Ben could think of, is to imagine a massive X to mark the Beasts wan weak spot. He Suddenly squeezed an imaginary sword straight into his beating heart. He was dead. But suprisingly Ben was confused he was still in Egypt.
  

wetherlady's 100 wc

It was time. I mean, the pilot can’t muck up. Can he? Time to go. We all piled onto the helicopter. Every nerve in my body was reacting. Suddenly, the blades started whirring. I felt sick. We took off with a thud. My heart was pounding rapidly, I’d lost control. Help was needed! I told myself to stop worrying but i couldn’t.
After a few minutes, the lads started joking around, I didn’t feel so bad anymore… until I looked out. It was time for me to jump. I could see where everybody had to land… X Marks the Spot. Here I go.

Joey Rap 100 WC

Lonely and unloved sitting on the ragid streets of Norfolk. No money and no home it was as if i was on the edge of a cliff waiting to fall.

I was staring at death up the wall of dispear i was starting to perish what could i do? The trees stared at me the windows were grinning at me smugly i was in the past. All of a sudden in the corner of my eye i noticed an x X MARKS THE SPOT. I dug it up and there it was treasure my life was saved - i climbed back up the cliff.

Lucy Wi. 100 WC

Olivia on the X

Fidgeting noisily four year old olivia fiddled with the coins in her purse. Mrs Jones furious face glared at Olivia as she disrupted the class for the hundredth time that day.
“Olivia , I’ve had enough of you disrupting the class today, I know how to keep you still !”

Striding towards the cupboard she grabbed the tape and stuck a large red X marks the spot on the carpet. for Olivia to sit on.She sat there for a few minutes and suddenly  bang ! the fire alarm went off. Everyone rushed. out of the room expect Olivia still sat in the X marks the spot...

Luke 100 wc

I wake up to the sound of torture. I could smell fear. I started to hear footsteps in the distance
then I realized I was not along.

“help!” I recognised that voice it was my friend i started to run towards not stopping “help!” he
shouted again. Which encouraged me to run faster and faster until i suddenly stopped in blood
written  Denis Heart died 1981 by the hand of the master criminal x marks the spot...

Naomi 100wc

It was my birthday! I was waiting in my pirate costume. Suddenly,the doorbell rang. I jumped up and ran to the door. I seized the door handle,pulled it open and there they were. My friends had arrived. All with a wide grin on their face.

Once they were all in I found my mum with a treasure map.I took the map. We were all excited. Everyone looked at it. There was an x. As pirates say x marks the spot. We ran around the house. We looked everywhere. Finally we found it. But it was not what it first seemed.


Zach 100WC

My heart was beating like a drum as i ran down the dark, ghostly corridoor.My mindwas blank;where was I.Bang! I came to an end and there it was. I was looking directly at a blood drenched corpse.

My hand was wet. I looked down and blood covered my arm like a sleeve. My face went pale as  I realised that my knife was forced into the heart of the body. In a panic, I wrapped my jacket around the dead body and dragged it to the  overgrown garden. X marks the spot where I buried the evidence.

Josephs-100 WC

The turquoise waves washed Edward onto shore.His face gently rubbing on the tropical sand.
Edward slowly lifted his drenched face and gazed into the breathtaking island,he washed upon.


The smell of juicy pineapples filled up his nostrils like he had never seen food before.Edward was in astonishment,the sound of cheeky monkeys searching for some tasty fruit.The smell of the fruit was making Edwards mouth water.The sweat from his dripping forehead trickled down his cheek.

There,square in front of him was a x mark the spot the substantial spot made Edward generously rich.

Sophie Rawlinson - 100wc The Cross

In the year 2000, three phones suddenly appeared with maps ending with an X. They followed the maps towards a great discovery…


It was time. Rob, Tuck and Alex would now set on an adventure that will change their lives.


Quarter of a mile to go. They stop. The sandy terrain of the desert lay ahead. The sun was scorching, burning their skin like wood on a fire.


“Over here!” An object sat, buried in the sand. Its nitid metal poked helplessly out of the ground.


They knew what it was when it suddenly floated off the ground. A robot.
X marks the spot…”

The Watch By Sophie Campbell - 100 Word Challenge

The Watch


I look and look. Still nothing. I can’t find it. X marks the spot, I remember. I look for another clue, a mound of dirt maybe. The I see it. A black X made of ash. I use my dry hands to dig until I come to a silver watch, my Grandma’s silver watch. It seemed to be in surprisingly good condition, I think as I stroke it’s delicate black hands. “ Mira?” I hear Grandma’s gentle voice whisper.
“ Grandma?” I mumble back. Nothing. I wipe my eyes as a salty tear falls from my stormy blue eyes. I'd lost my Grandma again.