My 100 word challenge Sophie Rawlinson

My 100 word challenge

I’m still sightless. I don’t know where I am, but all I do know is that today could change my life.

I am walking through a hospital, now going to have surgery. A hand holding mine is comforting, but doesn't stop fear of what might happen. My wife sits me on a bed and lets go of my hand.

“It’s going to be ok.” Her words echoed in my mind as they put me to sleep.

It felt like hours had passed since I was walking through halls of the hospital.

They removed the bandages...suddenly I could see again.

By Sophie Rawlinson

Kyle's 100wc

“Look at that!” Bob bellowed at Fred as his jaw dropped in shock.

“It’s a HUGE Bumble Bee!” Fred exclaimed as he fainted of happiness.

Bob had no time to waste, he ran as fast as he could to find a medic, but there was no point as he remembered

that he was on the Island Of Bare Grills.

But suddenly I saw a … GIGANTIC Bumble Bee flying 2000ft in the air above me.

ROAR, Bob jumped, he had heard the most terrifying roar he had ever heard.

Bob vanished instantly into the dark, gloomy woods without a sound!

Questions

1) Find the word that describes the Bee?

2) why does it say Bob had no time to waist?

3) What was the name of the Island that Bob was on?

4) put these in chronological order.

                                                

1st		bob runs
2nd		fred faints
3rd		bob  goes into the woods

Amy's 100WC

Dear Diary,

                 Today i was at the beach with Olivia. Did you know what we saw? A HUGE bee, just under the peer! Our legs wobbled a bit, but we edged closer to it. I took some pictures to prove the bee is real.

We sat there for ages drawing it's delicate wings. But as the sun descended, it was time to leave. My heart sank to the bottom of my tummy. i didn't want to leave. i wanted to keep drawing!

I will show my mum the pictures i took. do you think she will believe me?

From Amy.

Questions

Who did Amy go to the beach with?

A) Jess     C) Olivia
B) Lucy     D) Ruby

How do you think they felt when they saw the animal, and how do you know?
_____________________________________


What did they see? Tick one box.

	Huge	Small
Wasp
Bee

Why did Amy take some pictures?
_____________________________________

When did they think it was time to go?

A) When they got bored         C) When her mum came
B) When the sun descended  D) when her pencil broke

What do you think Amy's mum will say about the pictures?
______________________________________________________

100 wc Ali

100 WC
Once there was a man named John. He was a insect expert. You could ask him hundreds of questions about insects.He would know them. But one day there was a question about a dead bumblebee that he couldn't answer.
Dear Diary,
 Today i’m not in the best of moods.
There is a question about the death of a huge,healthy bumblebee at a zoo.They rang me earlier for me to go examine the bee. I had all my equipment yet I couldn’t even get an idea about how it could of died died.
I don’t know what to do...

What do you think interests John?

Why does the writer use an ellipse after I don't know what to do...

Find and copy a time connective

What insect is in the story?

How do you think john felt when he couldn't answer the question?

 

“ I can't believe she is making us do a report on the attack of the giant bumble bee from 1926. That means going to the library every night for three weeks!” Moned Lewis, a year five pupil in Mrs Bats class.

As the street lights came on Lewis and Charlie headed to the library. While Lewis was busy texting, Charlie spotted a picture in the book he was reading, not just any photo one that made you interested in what was going on and why.

The picture show two people examining the all mighty beast that killed thousands of people.

By Lauren

How did Lewis feel in paragraph one? Explain why.

When did the go to the library?

A:When did the sun rose.

B:When the street lights came on.

C:Midnight.

Why did Lewis mone about the project?

What did the picture show explain as fully as you can?

Today on Buss News, Beesy(famous singer) desserped 2 hours before midnight last night…

Police are still searching for her or body. Everyone is devastated. No one knows how the popstar desserped.

We interviewed Mother,”I’m in shock. She was fine when I last saw her. I bet she was taken, how could someone take a mother away from beautiful children.” Quoted Mrs Bozz with a tear running down her face.

Beesy children Bussy and Bob, woke minutes after their mother had gone. Which was too late.

Police think they have found the body of Beesy. Beesy desserped 2 hours before midnight 6 weeks ago.

1.What type of writing is this?

1st preson

Diary

Newspaper

2.Who is Beesy?

3. How does Mrs Bozz feel and why?

There are two Scientists called Josh and Luke. Do you want to know more about them? Well this is the story…

It was a Saturday evening roughly 6:30, i was board, Charley was at his friends and my parents, they were having one of their daily crises. “ Mum can i go for a walk?”

“Don't go far and be careful!!!”

“Bye…”

“7:30 for tea”

I saw two Scientists two centimeters tall heading towards a Bumble Bee. He said to me, “this Bumble Bee is dead”Tears pouring down his face. They said their names but then were...GONE... 

1. What day did this story take place?
Sunday
Monday
Saturday 
Tuesday

2. Were was Charley?
Swimming
Friends
Playground

3. Write as fully as you can about the two Scientists...



4. What happened to the Bumble Bee?

5. Explain why...GONE...is a good word to finish with...

6. What time did this story take place?

7. Who would you like to be the character of in this story, name one person...  

BREAKING NEWS! Buzzy the buzzing

bee has died. Buzzy’s death has left people destroy. The funeral will take place in ireland. when scientist found her they were overwhelmed to find such a rare species. Buzzys children and husband said we will miss buzzy and hope that she will have a good afterlife. we have  just had some news come in about how she died scientist believe it was caused by a heart attack.

Today on the six o'clock news,giant bee crashes in London , the university have taken it thirty minutes ago and are now trying to find out where it came from and the university have called it Boris the big bee .There has been more than one sightings of wired nature there have been two meter long caterpillars in Scotland .

Some people say it’s the beginning of the end others say it’s Japan making big bugs.The university of London have found out that the bees DNA is irregular , and more closely related to a millipede than a bee , due to this there is much more to discover.

1. where did the bee crash

2. what did they call it

3. what is the bee more closely related to

4. which university took it

5. why did the writer say “due to this there is much more to discover”        

      

The Giant Bee Apocalypse

On a day where there was no movement across the fields, a bee appeared out of nowhere.

It was no normal bee it was a huge, massive bee heading straight for a harmless town called Blofield. Meanwhile the bee headed for the town, more and more huge bees furiously shot to the unlucky town at lightning bolt speed. Two scientists were walking near all the bees.BOOM! A huge bee stumbled into the ground knocking it out instantly. The scientists rushed over to investigate the beast. Only minutes of checking it out they realized it was a giant bee. And there was many of them.

Questions

1. Did the bees die or faint?

2. where were the bees going?

3.What was the creature?Tick one

Bee

Caterpillar

Ladybird

Giant Bee

Giant Bird

4. Did it go for Blofield or Brundall?

5.How did the scientists feel about the fallen bee?

100 wc by Blythe

Dear J M Hewitt,

                         I am writing to explain my opinion on The Huge Bumblebee.

Although the bumblebee had a high chance of dying from natural causes I believe it’s unpleasant to look at. I love bumblebees! So I find it very hard to see one in that state.

Also, I don’t understand the need to have the toy scientists pulling the bug apart. Many people think this is an irrelevant to have in a photo. This makes me feel queasy and that is not what pictures are ment to do.

In conclusion I think there was no need to put a dead bumblebee in a picture. It is irrelevant and not needed.

Your Sincerely

A concerned child who

loves bumblebees.(Really i do).




QUESTIONS

Why did they write the letter?



What are the fake scientists doing to the bee?



Rewrite the first sentance of the paraghraph beguinning with "Although" with the semi colon(;)

Massive bee photo 100wc

A look can change everything. Maybe when you glanced into the bully’s eyes and saw hardship and suffering, rather than a whole lot of bad. Or perhaps it was when you saw a glint of silver, followed by an ear-piercing scream.

But this was real. His stripes; unmistakably black and yellow, his wings; beating perfectly with the clock, his size; as tall as a stag. This was certainly nothing she'd ever seen before….

“A giant bee was discovered near Science Lane. It had seen to have trampled a small girl and now she is having serious medical attention.”

Olivia's 100WC

One summers day, when spring had arrived, Lucy (age 10) wondered, why are bees so small? For years Lucy was thinking about how peculiar the world is.

Years later, Lucy got a job as an animal scientist. she loved, meeting all kinds of different animals that she had never seen before.

One rainy day, there was a terrible accident when Lucy was experimenting on a poorly bee. The colorful chemicals exploded, as she knocked over the liquid nitro-don. The bee grew bigger and bigger, until it was the size as a classroom!

“I DON’T KNOW WHAT TO DO!” Screamed Lucy.

Questions

What's the name of the main character?

Why did the bee get so big?

What size did the bee grow to?

What job did she get?

What was she thinking of all her life?

News has hit  country !

A rare species of bumblebee has in a local broad,near one of the most known landmarks.

Scientists have discovered a recent survey , showing that this rare bumblebee has been around for  over 100 years ,we travelled to the area to discuss the public's feelings  on this rare and exciting day .

John 24 , explained how he felt about living near this rare creature  .”I woke early ! (6.00 am) I could hear people outside , my jaw dropped ,I couldnt prevent it , I had to wake my wife ! the rarest bumblebee had been discovered outside my house .”

By Alisha



What part do you know John is excited?

What style of writing is this?

How old was John?

A: 24

b: 54

c: 34

What has been around for over 100 years?

What comes first in the news report?

A: John discovered the bumble bee outside his house.

B: News has hit the country.

C: Scientists have discovered a recent survey.

The big bee

2025.For young Toby it was just a normal day : He went to school ,had his lessons, went home, had tea, went to bed.

But in the night around 3:30 there was an  extreme buzzing noise and then a crash,that landed in toby’s mum’s field.Then silence.he creeped out of his room and trembled weekley down the stairs.Idea’s were racing through his head as what it could have been.

As he watched in awe he had seen a giant bumblebee he sprinted to the phone in fear and called the C.I.A to come down and look.

questions

1. What words describe Toby’s fear?

2. Find and copy the words that describe the sound of the bee?

3. What phrase describes that he is curious?

4. How does he watch the bee?

5. What year was it set in?

Aspirational Sentences

INTRO

Dear Mr Stuart-Sheppard,

I am writing to express my opinions on aspirations week which I thoroughly enjoyed every minute.

I am writing to inform you that I thoroughly enjoyed Aspirations Week, especially the Norwich trip and Brundall Grand. It was a week to be remembered.

I am writing to inform you of my [view/opinions] of the enjoyable week known as Aspirations week.

I am writing to inform you that Aspirations Week was a huge success as it hit the headlines in a local paper. In my opinion it was [a blast].

I am writing to you to express my opinions and thought on the huge success of Aspirations Week, where we achieved and learnt many things.

I am writing to inform you of the extraordinary time I had during Aspirations Week.

I am writing to inform you that all of the children thoroughly enjoyed Aspirations Week and we hope to have another one next year.

I am writing to inform that Aspirations Week was absolutely, positively, phenomenal.

MAIN POINTS

Aspirations week was the first step of my [blinging] adventure of life.

On the first day of aspirations week Nathan's mum, Mrs Finch, explained about her company Safe STS.

Nathan's mum, Mrs Finch, came to Brundall to tell us about her phenomenal job at Safe STS.

On Thursday and Friday, Staff and pupils were preparing for the big opening of Brundall Grand. Even though the organisation was chaotic during the week, everything came together on the day.

It was a memorable experience to make our own weather reports at the BBC and learn about the different jobs.

The part of our extraordinary trip I enjoyed the most, was walking through the Victorian streets and learning about the history.

I was able to visualise my future careers and imagine myself in the future.

The most sublime venue I came across was the Marble Hall at AVIVA. It must have taken real tenacity to build a company and premises of this magnitude.

During Aspirations week, Olly Day gave us an exciting magic lesson on road safety and made it more fun and memorable.

As well as setting up Brundall Grand, visitors came into school to share their experiences of real working life.

500 words Brownie

the phrase "hairs on the back of my legs" does make sense, its just people are used to saying neck instead of legs

I can’t believe I’m in this situation. Salty beads of sweat trickle down my face. Shivering with adrenaline, I can feel my heart pounding in my chest like it’s never felt before. My body trembles and I try to clear my throat.  Adrenaline races through my blood stream as I finally come face to face with my demons...

...The gun is still there. The tall, menacing man holding it looks both lazy and relaxed. He towers over me, glancing down at my worried expression. Facing ahead again, he ruffles his black, fitted jacket, adjusting it to keep warm. The mean look about him, from his squinting eyes to his pursed lips, worries me. Doesn`t he know that this next move could result in my future? I can hear some people to the right of me talk in hushed voices but I can’t make out what they are saying. The only words that make any sense to me are my own name being called.

The mood of the sky is frightened, too. The hidden clouds with the sun trying to peek through could result in only one thing – a downpour. The skies start leaking and rain comes down hard. The steady downpour sounds like a hail of bullets. I wish he would get on with it.

The hairs on the back of my legs stand up and my throat is parched but this is not a time to drink.  I need to concentrate and focus on the task ahead. I have had training for this situation. I think back to my preparation manuals and diaries and silently plan my next move.  I mustn’t give away my thoughts and feelings to those around me. Refocusing I become aware of the unnatural darkness of the afternoon and am reminded of the importance of this day.

Glancing across the field, I suddenly see someone running away. I recognise the familiar colours of our group and part of me wishes that I was him.  But I have a job to do. People are counting on me.  He disappears around the corner, vanishing, probably hiding from the rain. Or worse.

Suddenly, the man shouts an order. I crouch down, my heart beating even faster than before. My soaked, brown hair flops over my eyes. The gun explodes!

This is it... I drive forward, out of my blocks. The crowd to the right start chanting my name and I push on. My spikes grip the damp, rubber track as I sprint towards the finish line. All the hard work has paid off as I realise my opponents are far behind me.

I can see it. I am going to make it.

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a piece of descriptive writing around 150 words

This was for the 100WC but I unfortunately posted it too late. That is why I have added to it and it is now nearer to 150 words than 100.

The attic held memories. The memories were held in a beautifully-carved box, which sat lifelessly hour after hour on a window ledge. She visited it most days, generally in the evening. The peculiarity of how it got there was overlooked.

Dusty remnants of the past clung to the box and shone as beams of light shot through the window. The slightest touch could cause cascades of dust float up like swirling waves, soon after settling back where they came from. Her powdery fingers, streaked with mud, touched the box, stroking it as if it was a kitten. But when she lifted the lid, the residue was swept away; as indeed her mind did when she saw what was inside. A tear rolled down her flushed face, before dropping and blotching the lost photo of her dead grandfather.

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blythes 100wc

The sun bulged down on the city of Malenia. An eye-catching girl, called lorraine, was thrilled the sun was out. After months of rain and thunder Lorraine can finally go outside. she grabbed her laptop and before you can say abracadabra Lorraine was out of the house.

Lorraine wanted to sunbathe listening to her laptop,but when she lifted the lid BANG! her laptop exploded. “What happened!” explained Lorraine.

“MUM” Lorraine screamed half angry half scared.

“yes lorry?” Her mum always called her lorry

“DONT CALL ME THAT MY LAPTOP BROKE!”

“ Who of earth could of done that?”

The end is only the beginning...

Spencer's 100 word challenge

In a crystal white house there were 3 people named Tifa, Denzil and Marie tifa wa part of the strife deliveries service and far away from their house there were three remnants named  Kadajh Loz And yazue they were all part or f someone called. sephiroth.

Kadajh Loz and yazue all had jenover sells in them but they needed to get some more jenover
sells to make sephiroth. Just to make a long story short lets skip ahead. Kadajh is a girl.
Cloud had just finished of Kadajh but when she liffted the lid she turned into sephiroth

100 word challange

With a roar of an engine and a bang of a handgun the race started. Everyone was fighting for second place, except one. This car was a fully upgraded porsche 911 and as fast as a bullet the car was off the line and one minute later it was on the finishing line.

After the race the racing car drivers wife spotted some grey smoke coming from the red hot engine but when she came over to check it stopped so she lifted the lid and the engines colour was back to normal.

The next day the porsche broke down. 

 

100 word challenge;The story of a killer bin.

Reshelle an average girl with a very average background,she had a tacky old cat;a nattering mum , the sort of mum that takes ten minutes to say goodbye when round the neighbors house which you  hate ; and , a dad who thinks he knows everything .

While at school, she had to sit through a calculator test with no calculator.she didn't bother to do the test , she was quite a obstinate girl  with no desire to change her point of view.

when she got home she went to put a wrapper in the bin, but when she lifted the lid a dead cat layed there.  

                                                        100 wc

As the sun beats down on the astraling outback.She woak up over heating she didnt know where she was it was just an open egspation of desert. So she got up in pain and wonder on...  She came to old rusted cabbin she said to her self "should I go in" so she went in andstummbeld qacross a box but when she lifted the lid and there was a butiful she wouldbe rich byt she realised that she will die...