100 wc by Blythe

Dear J M Hewitt,

                         I am writing to explain my opinion on The Huge Bumblebee.

Although the bumblebee had a high chance of dying from natural causes I believe it’s unpleasant to look at. I love bumblebees! So I find it very hard to see one in that state.

Also, I don’t understand the need to have the toy scientists pulling the bug apart. Many people think this is an irrelevant to have in a photo. This makes me feel queasy and that is not what pictures are ment to do.

In conclusion I think there was no need to put a dead bumblebee in a picture. It is irrelevant and not needed.

Your Sincerely

A concerned child who

loves bumblebees.(Really i do).




QUESTIONS

Why did they write the letter?



What are the fake scientists doing to the bee?



Rewrite the first sentance of the paraghraph beguinning with "Although" with the semi colon(;)