Wednesday 7 May 2014

100 wc Ali

100 WC
Once there was a man named John. He was a insect expert. You could ask him hundreds of questions about insects.He would know them. But one day there was a question about a dead bumblebee that he couldn't answer.
Dear Diary,
 Today i’m not in the best of moods.
There is a question about the death of a huge,healthy bumblebee at a zoo.They rang me earlier for me to go examine the bee. I had all my equipment yet I couldn’t even get an idea about how it could of died died.
I don’t know what to do...

What do you think interests John?

Why does the writer use an ellipse after I don't know what to do...

Find and copy a time connective

What insect is in the story?

How do you think john felt when he couldn't answer the question?

 



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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous8 May 2014 at 09:24

    I think it was great because you did alliteration and you did a diary.

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  2. Anonymous8 May 2014 at 09:29

    Insects interest John because he is an insect expert.
    The writer uses the ellipse to show the passing of time.
    Once
    A bee
    He felt annoyed because he has to know every answer to every question.

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  3. Anonymous2 June 2014 at 09:31

    epic

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  4. Anonymous2 June 2014 at 09:37

    1) insects
    2)because it is a cliff hanger
    3)once

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  5. Anonymous2 June 2014 at 09:38

    nice questions

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  6. Anonymous4 June 2014 at 09:35

    its writen like a diary! Its cool...

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  7. Anonymous5 June 2014 at 09:36

    iI Like How It Changed From 3rd Person To 1st Person

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  8. Anonymous5 June 2014 at 09:37

    I like the intro

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  9. Anonymous9 June 2014 at 09:28

    very good discription

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  10. Anonymous23 June 2014 at 09:23

    good description

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