100 wc by kayleigh

A lonely girl on the street often stopt and watched the TV though the window of house number 2 (near the sweet shop). One day she stopt and watched the tv from outside the house.
On the news, was the sweet shop across the road which also had a advert for a brand of chocolate. Suddenly there was a rage, as people saw a stand with the chocolate.
Suddenly she got pulled into the store. She looked around but the shop keeper pulled her into the back,the girl was just starring at all the chocolate wishing for some,she let out a wimper and looked up wondering where everyone had gone...

100 word challenge Bryony

(12^th)

Easter is coming up and I can’t wait. Just wish it would come sooner!

(31^st)

It’s today and I lay in my bed in the morning looking at all that chocolate at the end of my bed. Wish I could eat it all of it at the same time!

(2^nd)

Gosh! Just finished my mini eggs and a whole Easter egg. It’s my friend’s birthday party today at the cinema!

(18^th)

My brother’s birthday is today, I feel neglected, looking at all that chocolate he got. WISHIY’S MY BIRTHDAY.

(20^TH)

Everyone has had their birthday mine’s next in two months, oh well never mind!

100 word challenge

The chocolate shop

It was the morning of the moving day; I decided to walk to the nearby chocolate shop. As I stepped in gracefully the tingle of bells, the smell of fresh chocolate. I looked around, looking at all the chocolate, my mouth watered with excitement.

With my eyes wide open I stepped closer to the chocolate, mesmerised by the fact there was three fountains dripping with glossy, mouth watering chocolate I begged the shop keeper for one but he cast me aside.

So I trundled home with my droopy head hanging down I had to just wait for my pocket money.

  

100wc

 The Easter of 2013 was to be the last 100 word challenge because all the markers ate poisoned chocolate eggs and died. I'm one of them and I survived. I was in the HQ and Samantha brought us all a chocolate egg. looking at all that chocolate just waiting there to be eaten made me feel hungry there was a voice in my head saying eat it but i couldn't because there is strict instructions that you couldn't. I was the first to try it and happily ate it but the others weren't so lucky I could not believe it.

100 wc

I was bored.  Everything was dull.  School was off and Jimmy, my best friend, was away in Canada!

So I decided to go to the shop.  When I got there I noticed something in the corner of my eye...

Chocolate! Looking at all that chocolate was another boy as well. We both sprinted to get the last packet of chocolate...

I was so close but the kid barged me out the way and dumped it on the counter.Then the man asked 

" 8 pounds please.", and then the kid slumped on the floor in distraught.  He didn't have enough money!

Writing week for theGoldenOrioles!

This  week the Orioles class has been partacing in wicked writing week (www.com.) They have been doing a range of writing-related activites.

The talented class have been doing a range of activites in cuding a four chapter story; Deconstuction diarys;Song writing and translating.

A deconstuction diary is a variety of of different instructional texts for them to do on a daily basis.

The year 4s have also been doing the the pied piper. They wrote it in German and the had the make as many English words in English as they could.

    

 

100 Word Challenge- Matthew

I was looking at all that chocolate, it looked so beautiful and then POP! Augustus Gloop came flying out and landed into the chocolate river!

Then Dippy Donka said"Augustus Gloop will you ever come out of my factory!"NEVER! shouted Augustus Gloop. This is heaven, I will never come out!

That day Dippy Donka planned to fire Augustus Gloop out of the factory by chocolate! I was amazed I had to see it!

Penguins construction work

In this wicked writing week (www.com) Brundall primary school have been celebrating literacy and the penguins have jumped right in so they can show of their amazing skills.

Penguins started the week receiving a letter from the three little pigs asking for help. The penguins class took the task joyfully. They firstly wrote a warning to mind out for the big bad wolf using ambitious vocabulary and detailed pictures.

Also they manufactured masks and wrote speech bubbles afterwards. On the next day the exited Penguins went outside and are now ,with the help of a special builder, making a luxurious house for the exited piggys: it will be wolf proof, have a waterproof roof and will be made by them.

Hopefully,  the brilliant children will write a creative to the three little pigs explaining how their new house has turned out.

On the day of the construction the exited class all loved the esteemed experience. One person exclaimed
"I had loads of fun!" They all really enjoyed the time. Finally the exquisite den was co
mplete. This is one of the many exiting exhilarating peaces of wicked work for the wicked writing week!

         

The terrific Toucans wicked writing week!!!

The toucans class have been working extremely hard this writing week, consequently, producing some extraordinary pieces of work.

This week was no ordinary week for the Toucans class.as part of the schools wicked writing week, the students, from Brundall primary school,started to write a story about shrinking.

Harry,taught by miss Hewitt,happened to mention"I am enjoying this amazing week for the reason being that in p.e we have been transforming from big to small."

Erin,a sweet little girl,positively informed us "we gave been going out looking and discovering danger hazards for little creatures around our school, such as; seagulls,puddles,dogs and rain as the main hazards.

Later on, during the week, Jack, another pupil, happily said,"we will also be watching films to do with shrinking, like; Alice in wonderland, ant bully, borrowers and Stuart little.

After a lovely week of amazing writing the terrific toucans are tired and ready for the Easter holiday break.

Jennifer's 100 word challenge

When i went to willy  wonkas chocolate shop i tried something amazing. Looking at all that chocolate I thought  why can't i have it,so when he wasn't looking i quickly took some.He set the wonkas on me and i closed the gates;i slipped and...

They jumped on me and locked me in the dark gloomy corridor number 24. All i saw skeletons of people he previously locked up.

I tried to escape but i couldn't the door was locked so i tried   the window it wasn't shut so i climbed out  and BANG...

What happens next?

this week the orieals class has been partacing

this week the orieals class has been

Debate Club

100 word challenge by Shannon

My friend and I skipped to the shops and while looking at the all that chocolate we thought of buying some and so we did.

My friend bought a fudge and rolos whilst I bought rolos and dairy milk. While walking home from we had lots of fun playing and eating the sweets.

While playing my friends mum arrived and and had to take Alexis home then I was playing on my own.

I put my pjs on and went to bed, then in the morning, I got dressed and went to school but it was a marvellous dream

The end 

Story Sentences

Cosmic Microwave

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Pick of the Week

Italy by Lottie

Tuna, pasta bake by Shannon

My cooking by Thomas

DVD Night by Lily

Renee's Song by Lauren

Pick of the Week

Football by Faith

Creating a Meal by Kayleigh

Summer Pudding Smoothie by Faith

Italy by Lottie

Kayleighs 100 word

In the news theres been reports of a strange car driving round,people believe its connected to the local robberys. They've attempted to stop it but havnt succeed. A boy named Robbie had seen the report, he had always wanted to be a police officer but nobody thought he could. Robbie thought to himself "I can stop this car ."
Suddenly "yes," he shouted "I've caught the robber". He landed himself a job as a officer what was next for him now,he was given this chance.
There in front of him was a speeding car. Bang the car stopped suddenly.....

100 Word Challenge-Callum

I, Callum, was walking home from school and I stopped, and looked; I saw a diamond, I thought oh my!

The next second I found myself in the entire middle of the road, I could not stop myself walking away!

I started to struggle but my instincts just pulled me out! I tried to stop my instincts but I couldn't.

Suddenly a car started coming, if the car ran over the diamond it would stick to the tire and be gone.

In half a second a man ran and picked me and the diamond up, the car stopped suddenly, O.M.G...

The car stopped suddenly

MEAW BANG! “What the what was that” shouted Sam why where there planes every were what is that.

What I had a strange dream that I was in world war two and I was surrounded by planes every were I looked planes were there.

When are we going out? When are we going for a ride I want to go now? Are we going to the beach? “Yes, yes we are.” Answers Mum.

The car stopped suddenly. We stopped because there is a…

MONSTER! Is in front of us. Quick lets run or it will be the end of us!!

100 wc - steven

I’ve always been really fond of Football and I was actually going to play in a real football match!

It was Thursday and it was time to go to my match.

I could feel the adrenaline pumping the blood through my body thoroughly.

As we arrived at the playing grounds, my Dad was rambling about how sports is good for co-ordination, so I got out as quick as I could ran to the coach.

We won! The score was 3-1! My Dad was so proud of me that he took me to a restaurant called Zak’s.

When we left the restaurant, which name was Zak’s, my  Dad was so proud of me and I felt very ambitious to push myself to the limits but the car stopped suddenly , I felt myself lift off the front car seat. My Dad drove us off a cliff…    

100wc-james

Steve was in his house with Charlie. When Steve mentioned he could hear a car revving like mad. It was odd. The speed limit was only 30. No one could do in excess of 5000 rpm.

They went outside and noticed the car, the strange thing was the windows were smashed and there were no doors. It must have been nicked. No one would sell that to you in the state it was in.

Some men came out and I was really scared. They never took their eyes off me. They were going to get me and I was dead.

100 WC - Thomas

I had just scored a hat trick for my under 16's football club.It was the best moment of my life! A car was on the road going slowly.Then the car stopped suddenly!

A man came out of the car.I thought about running but I also wanted to see what he was going to do.
I got caught in two minds!

He looked at me and  said
"Don't get to excited but I saw your performance today and last week and I think you can come to the football academy!"
"Thank you!" I said as I ran home!

by Sophie

TROUBLE BREWS

Their day was only just beginning and already there was excitement all around Harry and Louis’ dad’s extremely manic house.

Their dad warned them that there was a robber on the loose. Immediately they both wanted to find the robber.

“I will never ever give up until I find him.” Shouted Harry. “Neither will I,” agreed Louis the trouble maker.

“Let’s take our dad’s car, he won’t mind.” Murmured Harry. “Ok our big mission begins in just a few minutes.

They set off. The car stopped suddenly… in front of them was the robber about to attack with his ginormous axe.

100 word challenge

A cold wind blew as Jenny trudged home in the rain. Slowly, she started to run towards home when a car, Nans’, pulled up next to her. Jenny hopped in driving off. They drove along when…the car stopped suddenly, looking out! Screaming they fell!

Two glowing figures came down. It was Jenny’s dead mum and dad! Her dad went to Nan but her mum stayed still. They kissed them and vanished leaving jenny and Nan alive, at the bottom of a cliff.

After their accident they were indoors when Jenny saw two parents at the bottom of the garden smiling!        

BY BRYONY!

100 wc - sam

100 word challenge

As we arrived at Prehistoric Park we saw all the animals.

When we got into the room there were dinosaurs skeletons. There were stairs and a banner saying 100^th anniversary of Prehistoric park.

Later Sandra and I were told we should go for a tour around the park.

Half way through the tour we passed the T.rex enclosure the car stopped suddenly came out the enclosure and kicked the car. Our car fell over the side of the tour route. I fell but didn’t know were the kids were. Then I thought, they could die.   

!)) WC (100 WC)

I was strolling down Mr Dooley lane when abruptly a tour bus blocked the around me, it was One Direction.

As I was squinting, from in the distance came a car that slowly passed me and the bus.

Harry Styles jumped off the colossal tour bus to invite me and a friend to the concert that night.

We then heard a sound of screeching tyres. Niall shouted “What was that horrible sound?”

The man, who owned the car franticly, ran up the road while screaming “The car stopped suddenly. She was getting slower and slower and stopped in her tracks…”

100 WC by Shannon

One morning mum woke up and got dressed and went into Ella’s room and woke her up. Ella got dressed and went out with her mum the car broke down, and they got lost.

They had to sleep in the bush in the morning mum phoned the taxi man and he pick them up mum paid the taxi driver and said thank you. Dad was happy to have them back and they all had a party to celebrate there return and Ella wish had come true because she always wanted a little sister her name was called Jennifer.

               The end

100 Word Challenge-Matthew

A boy called Josh was excited; today he was actually going to a park! He had never been to a park, Josh couldn’t stop jumping around he was excited!

The moment finally arrived he jumped into the car in excitement, I’m actually going to a park, he was so excited! He finally got there he leaped out of the car. He suddenly remembered it’s an arcade, he got out his money and started playing games such as: Up from above, The 100 second challenge and his personal favourite splash the teacher! He finally had to go back to his house!   

100wc-mal

Dear diary,

On the way to football cars were whizzing everywhere on a 30 mph road. All of the cars were going 70 mph.

Since I got drove home, the journey was alot quicker. It was warmer and I was happier. When I walked I thought the cars were going to kill me.

When I was in the city I brought some food and clothes. I like going there because it is like I have freedom.

A car started to follow us. Me and my friends were scared. The car stopped suddenly… I was scared. Then we decided to run.