I
was strolling down Mr Dooley lane when abruptly a tour bus blocked the around
me, it was One Direction.
As
I was squinting, from in the distance came a car that slowly passed me and the bus.
Harry
Styles jumped off the colossal tour bus to invite me and a friend to the concert
that night.
We
then heard a sound of screeching tyres. Niall shouted “What was that horrible sound?”
The
man, who owned the car franticly, ran up the road while screaming “The car stopped
suddenly. She was getting slower and slower and stopped in her tracks…”
what going to happen next!!!!
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