Friday 1 March 2013

by Sophie


TROUBLE BREWS

Their day was only just beginning and already there was excitement all around Harry and Louis’ dad’s extremely manic house.


Their dad warned them that there was a robber on the loose. Immediately they both wanted to find the robber.


“I will never ever give up until I find him.” Shouted Harry. “Neither will I,” agreed Louis the trouble maker.


“Let’s take our dad’s car, he won’t mind.” Murmured Harry. “Ok our big mission begins in just a few minutes.


They set off. The car stopped suddenly… in front of them was the robber about to attack with his ginormous axe.

2 comments:

  1. A fantastic adventure, Sophie. I like the idea of the extremely manic house! You've really thought hard about descriptive alternatives to the word 'said'.

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