Thursday 10 May 2012

100 word challenge


He rolled rapidly down the mud smothered hill. His dirty face being penetrated by Shards of rock, all that could possibly enter his aching brain was fear; accompanied by desperation. As he craned his neck around to face the hill that he’d fallen from, he heard their wails and screeches each one like a knife through his heart.

Slowly he heaved himself up looking around to his horror it became apparent that he was in a tall towering tree high above the forest floor. Last time he was conscious he wasn’t in a forest “Now what do I need do?” 

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  2. This is EXCEPTIONAL keep up the good work for SATS Tobz

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  3. As always, your work is amazing but this... its just :)

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  4. Your work is truly wonderful!

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