Thursday 24 May 2012

Jazzy A - Week 32 100WC


You should come here to this magical place
The rollercoaster go at a extremely fast pace
We will make sure you have a fabulous day
At the end of the ride you’ll be shouting yay!
Everybody highly recommends for you to come here
To unique fun fair where you can constantly cheer
You’ll want to come here again and again
You could come here five times or maybe even ten
You’ll end the day with a massive smile
This will definitely last you a long while 

2 comments:

  1. This is amazing :)

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  2. Hi Jazzy!

    Wow, I am seriously impressed! Not only have you written a piece of persuasive writing, but you have written a poem! Well done - you should be very proud of yourself!

    Amy :)

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