Harry's 100 word challenge
Sadly, alone on the street lives a man who needs money (£50,000) to buy a house or else he’ll die of starvation since he has nowhere to store his food.
“I’ve checked jobs you get quickly well paid for and found a suitable job for myself.” He went off to a lego
Building to begin making lego ships. Surprisingly, he was extremely good at making lego consequently, he made £45,000 from Monday to Friday! This is very good however he needs 50,000 pounds. “A mortgage! Why couldn’t I think of a morgage!
“haa, let myself eat, I am ravenously hungry...
LLN!!!!! thats really good! nice use of ravenously :)
ReplyDeleteReally good description however I found it hard to follow
ReplyDeleteHi Harry, well done for having a go at the 100wc! Remember to include the prompt into your story next time. This week it was '… now what do I need…' but look out for the new one next week. I like your variety of sentence openers (consequently, surprisingly, sadly) they really make the writing more interesting to read. Keep up the great writing! I look forward to reading more!
ReplyDeleteNice description Harry!
ReplyDeleteHi Harry, your story has a good flow. Except for the prompt which is missing, it is an interesting read especially with the use of punctuations and descriptions. Keep writing well.
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