paige’s 500 word challenge

As Rose woke , she heard a noise coming from her front garden ,she peered out of her window

and saw a shadow .Rose gasped as she pulled back the curtain   and ran to wake her brother David .

“David David “ she yelled David woke  “ Whatever is the matter Rose?” asked David “I saw a shadow lurking outside in the wood .” she replied “You're  just having a dream go back to bed,” he grumbled.

But just as Rose went to walk out of her brothers room .Suddenly there was a someone hooting in the woods …

David jumped his sister was right he stared out of his window and there was some sort of spirit

staring right into the ocean blue eyes of David , who was wearing his winter blush pajamas .

Then once again it had disappeared out of site of both David and Rose.

Davids spine was tingling with fear.

As the night carried on.As the wind got blustry , the smooky coloured clouds started to show up a lot more,the river at the end of the lane started to sway side to side like a married couple having their first dance together David and Rose were thinking of a planto find out who keeps coming to haunt Rose.

“Rose do you have an idea?” questioned David “ Yes i do,” replied Rose “What is it ?” asked David still in his winter blush pajamas.

Meanwhile, as Rose was telling her brother her idea David  noticed that there was something going on in his sisters violet bladed room but before that he heard some rattling going  on downstairs .

“Rose what's going on in your room ?” shrieked David “ What do you mean ?” replied Rose “um i think we need to investigate your room !” whispered David to Rose “okay let's go!” exclaimed Rose.

As Rose and David went to go past their parents room SUDDENLY...all f the rusty ,old  doors slammed shut but the weird thing was that there was no one messing with the pure, autumn coloured doors.

“AAARRRGGHHH whos there?”screamed Rose while helping her brother up after he stumbled on one of baby brothers toys .

As the sun rose that morning ,Rose woke once again.To refresh her mind she went for a jog down Bluebell lane when she saw her friend Daisy ,who was doing some garderning her front garden . Rose thought to herself that there was something strange goin on and that Daisy was doing the exact same thing as yesterday.

Rose went up to Daisy but Daisy Didn't say anything when normally she was the chatterbox . “Hi Daisy went you doing that yesterday ?” asked Rose .As Daisy didn't say anything  Rose returned home .

“Rose Rose wake up!” queried Kacey “Thew you're alive,” Kacey was relieved thew it was just a dream thought Rose as she sighed with relief “why are you sweating Rose,” questioned Kacey Rose felt her head “i don't know!” replied Rose . After that day there was no more dreams about spirits ,so that is how the story ended with that she always called her brother David.