Thursday 27 February 2014

500 Words Challenge by Kacey

As Lauren woke, she saw a shadow. It disappeared into the darkness… She gasped. She knew she was not alone. There was an eerie noise in the woods ahead.

Nervously, she mumbled “Hello.” there was no reply. She got up. Step by frightening step, Laurens heart began to beat faster and faster. Who was there? What was there?

As night went on she kept walking, wondering what would happen to her. Knowing that she was not alone, she kept checking to see if anyone was there. Suddenly, she saw a vision of her mum. She knew she wasn’t there though. Her mum had died in a terrible fire five years ago.

Lauren peered around the corner of a building. She heard a scream. She looked. Nothing was there.

As she carried on walking, Lauren saw the old autumn trees, branches hanging down the sides. The whistled every time the wind blew. The young girl could see old, unwanted, forgotten cut down trees growing mould the longer they were left. Fungi everywhere.

Her deep blue eyes checked for people. She saw dead midnight mars flowers. The colour of the distant forest was deep darkness and misty skies. Lauren kept hoping to see garden green grass and granny smith leaves on trees. There was none of that. Pitch black skies looking more empty than ever.

She thought she was dreaming, but she was not.

Suddenly, everything from her bedroom, all her friends and family appeared in the sky.

She started running. At this moment in time, her heart was beating faster than lightning. “GO AWAY! Go away! STOP IT! Stop it!” she screamed, hoping it would stop. Then, she tripped.

She fell over and knocked her self unconscious.

After one hour, she woke up. Lying next to her was a lake. She stood up and peered into the lake. She did not see her reflection though, she saw a spirit.

“You are in trouble little girl. Soon there will be a flood and you will be the victim…

It disappeared into the water. She blinked. The water swayed elegantly side to side like a happy couple slow dancing together. Then, to her surprise, the tempestuous water became angry. The waves were furiously raging at the poor, innocent girl.

The water suddenly rushed out of the pond. It forced Lauren to go flying around in a scary, unknown place.

“AARRGGHH!” she screamed as the wild waves pulled her everywhere. Two and a half intense, frightful hours went by until it stopped.

As the sun rose, she listened for voices. She thought she heard her friend’s voice. Lauren looked around for her. To her surprise, she was there. She ran as fast as her legs would carry her.

When she reached her friend, she screamed “Kacey! Kacey! Hello! I’m so glad to see you!”

There was no reply. Kacey kept walking.

Lauren burst into tears. She thought to herself, “Will I ever be free?”

Time was stopped. She was stuck forever and ever after.

Unloved House description by Amy

As Luke trudged down the rickety staircase, he realised just how much of a mess the house was. Newspapers were scattered all around in each and every room, dating back to at least 1992. In the kitchen, plates from last night would have more and more sticky sludge, as the nights carried on. If the winds were to get too reckless, the house would creek struggling to keep standing. One night, there was a storm, too strong for the unloved house to cope with. The building suddenly collapsed into no more than little pieces of concrete, taking Luke with it.

Wednesday 26 February 2014

on a hot summers day one little boy called Eric woke up but not in his bed, no no no because Eric woke up on intergalactc space station with 5 super heros standing right next to him, there was superman, the hulk, iron man, spiderman, and wolverine, all just staring at him, as if they were venturing into his brain waves, he thought. 'quick, stop' thinking about how wild they looked finally, hulk said something hhheeekkkfff i iron man shortly correctected him and he said "we brought you here to tempt you to a magitical super hero" yes finally people will think i'm cool, thought Eric.
First of all spiderman said you need a costume like mine, and we have the thing, say hello to the cool outfit. it was a hazelnut brown fur suit with a badger like mask to cover the identidy.
" Oh my god" that is so cool, he tried it on and the coon was born.

the next day the five superheros decided to teach the coons to climb buildings, so they dropped eric and  spiderman to   Norwich  so they could  climb the train station, but the force spider let him do that, he had to go threw a seais of smarter object to prepare the coon for the station.

but before spiderman could think of something to climb batman trned up in his nitros ingested bat rover with an insane body kit which gives it an evil stare like a serial killer. Spiderman and the coon both thought. with thread calapers and red sport badge it was amazing and ideal for the job.

so the coon decided to climb the bat rover sport, this didnt go well. Eric had no technique so he simply fell off. spiderman taught him a special techniqe to do it, he told him to dig his fingers and because he is a coon he has claws to help him even moreand finally he climbed it.the next thing the coon climbed was set up and it was a bus, but thanks to his new tecnique he easily concored the bus.

the last one before the train station and it was a lorry and on this one Eric learnt a new way of getting up nicely, you smash the window and stand on the dash then jump on the roof.

finally they got to climbing the trainstation for rhis aapplied the same method of climbing as the truck, so he smashed the bottom window and en jumped to a ledge on top of the window and he coped doing this untill the coon concored the trainstation challenge.

when they got back to the spacestation they thought he should be able to fly but obviously couldn't fly without any jet so ironman gave the coon some jet boots and gloves and he got the talent immediatly so that is how he became a super hero.
paige’s 500 word challenge



As Rose woke , she heard a noise coming from her front garden ,she peered out of her window
and saw a shadow .Rose gasped as she pulled back the curtain   and ran to wake her brother David .


“David David “ she yelled David woke  “ Whatever is the matter Rose?” asked David “I saw a shadow lurking outside in the wood .” she replied “You're  just having a dream go back to bed,” he grumbled.


But just as Rose went to walk out of her brothers room .Suddenly there was a someone hooting in the woods …


David jumped his sister was right he stared out of his window and there was some sort of spirit
staring right into the ocean blue eyes of David , who was wearing his winter blush pajamas .
Then once again it had disappeared out of site of both David and Rose.


Davids spine was tingling with fear.


As the night carried on.As the wind got blustry , the smooky coloured clouds started to show up a lot more,the river at the end of the lane started to sway side to side like a married couple having their first dance together David and Rose were thinking of a planto find out who keeps coming to haunt Rose.


“Rose do you have an idea?” questioned David “ Yes i do,” replied Rose “What is it ?” asked David still in his winter blush pajamas.


Meanwhile, as Rose was telling her brother her idea David  noticed that there was something going on in his sisters violet bladed room but before that he heard some rattling going  on downstairs .


“Rose what's going on in your room ?” shrieked David “ What do you mean ?” replied Rose “um i think we need to investigate your room !” whispered David to Rose “okay let's go!” exclaimed Rose.


As Rose and David went to go past their parents room SUDDENLY...all f the rusty ,old  doors slammed shut but the weird thing was that there was no one messing with the pure, autumn coloured doors.


“AAARRRGGHHH whos there?”screamed Rose while helping her brother up after he stumbled on one of baby brothers toys .


As the sun rose that morning ,Rose woke once again.To refresh her mind she went for a jog down Bluebell lane when she saw her friend Daisy ,who was doing some garderning her front garden . Rose thought to herself that there was something strange goin on and that Daisy was doing the exact same thing as yesterday.
Rose went up to Daisy but Daisy Didn't say anything when normally she was the chatterbox . “Hi Daisy went you doing that yesterday ?” asked Rose .As Daisy didn't say anything  Rose returned home .


“Rose Rose wake up!” queried Kacey “Thew you're alive,” Kacey was relieved thew it was just a dream thought Rose as she sighed with relief “why are you sweating Rose,” questioned Kacey Rose felt her head “i don't know!” replied Rose . After that day there was no more dreams about spirits ,so that is how the story ended with that she always called her brother David.

AROUND THE WORLD

Around The World

The small plane crawled across the landscape like a insect over a tablecloth. As james climbed out of the plane he was assisted by a employee at the airport to take his bags to the waiting area. On the way up he bought a few drinks and bracelet accessories for him to remember Tokyo.

 When James got to the waiting area he booked a taxi to pick him up at 2:00 and to give him time to look around.

 After he looked around he got a plane to New York and on the plane he played the game mine-craft.

 He was in the plane he saw the Statue Of Liberality gazing under his feet and he was dying to take a picture of it. A few minutes later he came to a stop in the plane and he opened his eyes and he was there "New York, finally!" James started to walk to the Statue Of Liberality, but something caught his eye, it was a top with a map of the whole of New York.

 James finally reached the glimmering Statue Of Liberty. There was lots of people crowding the Statue Of Liberty hoping to take a glimpse picture of it. For James it took a few tries but he finally got it and the sun glimmered on it at the perfect time. He was finished and went to Australia.

 After the 24 hour flight he James could go scuba diving in the coral reef for a picture special.

 The fantastic adventurer got a class to go scuba diving and “ It was absolutely speechless,” he got to see many fish and creatures you would never see at home. He took a few pictures and his favorite one is the rock lobster.

 He had booked a hotel to stay for the night so he can do more activities the next day. It was a wet night but he stayed through it.

  The adventurer woke up he started his 5 hour journey to the airport. He got there just in time for the plane but if he was a minute late he would of missed the plane.

 He reached Syria, the place he was going, he was very careful as he could be abducted by dirty thieves.

 A war was only a bit north to where he was and he could see machine gun bullets flying everywhere and the sound of people being scavenged and killed. Suddenly, out of know where, he was kidnapped vicious bandits with AK-47’s and half scabby legs! He was petrified. So scared he fainted and he was knocked out for 12 hours…

He woke up and he was in a barred room with nothing, but after a few minutes he realised he was in a jail with 10 or 12 other people who were skinny as a rat and as dirty as mud and also looked like a ripped in half chocolate bar with blood all over! I hope you enjoyed this story.                

500 WC By Jack




saving the world

One cold, dull and stormy night, Mason lay still in his bed, his muscles felt unused and numb after a whole day in the lounge on the sofa watching TV. He had such a lazy day that the walk  to his bed felt like a mile. Even though Mason was extremely tired he could not get to sleep. knowing he had a basketball game tomorrow, his brain just would not shut down. Finally, he drifted off, not knowing what catastrophe would strike him when he woke up.



In the dream Mason was having he saw lots of visions of weird alien like creature. The creatures were oddly familiar to Mason but he didn't know where he had seen them but he had seen them before. At the end of the dream he saw a scary figure with the shape of a man.



When Mason woke up, he was relieved it was a dream and took five deep breathes and then nearly fainted as his house was in the middle of destruction. The walls were destroyed, the windows were broken and Mason was confused.



seeing the world destroyed made him remember the times of happiness. In his mind he saw a view of a massive luxurious field with patches of sludgy chocolate brown mud the field also had blossoming flowers of a huge variety he also saw a calm aqua blue pond that swallows all his daring enemies who tried to overcome his mighty power. But he realised that was the past and this was the present the land was filled with grey with smoke in the air with the colour of deep darkness and dirt flying through the air with the colour of architectural dig brown.  


Mason hesitated for a few seconds but then realised that if he did not escape he was going to die. So he ran as fast as Usain Bolt but just as he was about to go out the front door, his path was blocked by a piece of debris. He was so so scared that he started to feel nauseous and shortly after... he fainted.


when mason woke up he was in a alien prison on mars and at that moment he realised that mars was attacking his planet so that meant he was in the future.


eventually mason found a way out of the prison through a odious sewage pipe and ran into three people named Alfie, Joe and Alfred they had a stash of guns, a shotgun , a revolver ,a rifle , a sawn off shotgun and a sword .


“Who are you” asked Mason. The people did not give a word but on the wall there was a plan to blow up the bomb in the middle of the planet so they didn’t hesitate to go.


They climbed out of the sewage tunnel and ambushed the aliens. Tragically Joe got shot in the shoulder but he was alright.


They rushed to the core but there weapons were out of ammo so they had to use there katanas to slice the bomb. this was dangerous. KAPOW!!!


And he woke up in his own bed. This was extremely mysterious.    

REBECCAS good 500 STORY


­“Ping!” went the Brown Sugar Café bell and Lucy ran to take an order. Lucy was an ordinary teenager. She had ocean sky eyes, silk blond hair and shiny red lips.

The café phone rang. It was for Lucy. She took hold of the phone and listened to a man from the hospital, “Quick! Your dad has been hurt. Come now!” Lucy dropped the phone and ran out of the café. Throwing off her apron, she jumped on her bike and sped away to the hospital.

When Lucy got there, one of the receptionists told her what was wrong with her dad. He had been cliff climbing and fell and hit his head. Now he was in a coma. As soon as Lucy heard, she couldn’t breathe. It was like she was winded. What would she do? What could she do? She walked out and no-one really knew why. Then Lucy just ran and didn’t stop.

Lucy ran over a field and fell over crying. Then she heard a rustle. A dog jumped out at her. It was a stray dog with white and brown fur. She was happier now she had someone with her. She said she would call him Jay and as Lucy got up to walk, Jay walked beside her, until they reached a pond. The pond was misty and infested with bugs. It was obviously old. The wind brushing against her, she felt that she could just be swept off with the wind. Jay followed Lucy back to the café. Jay settled down in a corner eating some food Lucy found for him. Everyone was wondering about what had happened.

A few hours had passed and a strange lady came in and sat at a table next to the window. She remained there for the afternoon, staring out of the window or at Lucy. As soon as the lady left, there was a little white box with red ribbon on the table. Lucy went to clear the table. She opened it and inside was a flower. It seemed there was spilled sugar on the table. Lucy couldn’t quite figure out the shape that had been drawn in the sugar so cleared it up. This happened every day for the rest of the week until Lucy went up to the strange lady and asked why she left the strange gifts. She said that Lucy and Jay should meet her at the pond that night.  They went and met the lady there. The lady said, “This might sound strange but I am your guardian angel, but you can’t tell anyone!” Lucy replied, “Why are you here?” The lady explained that everyone has a guardian angel and she was there to help Lucy, leaving gifts and messages in the sugar.

“Go back to the hospital as your dad will be fine.” Lucy didn’t believe this. When she turned to go, Jay stayed with the lady. When Lucy arrived at the hospital reception, she found out that it was true.
                                                                500 Word Challenge
                                                                
                             


                               Misdirection by Ben Wiggett


This story begins in the city at who knows what time, with me being shot at. For you to know what happened I'll take it back way back to the beginning.


It seemed to be like any other day with the classic car driving by in a puddle, splashing water all over me like a dark rainy day. I just sighed and trudged off to work. When I got there I was told that I was 45 minutes late and that is the same as stealing. Feeling depressed, I took the elevator to the top floor at my work station next to the window.


After about an hour I started to hear gun fire outside. I looked down, a fat guy was being shot. I ran to the elevator. When I got to the bottom floor I ran out of the door and over to the fat guy. I asked what his name was. He said Spencer Gibbons and then he died.


When I got home I thought I have heard that name before so I went to search him up on the Wiki and found out he was the owner of the largest cat's eye gem. Then I had to turn on the TV, the cat's eye gem had been stolen from the most secure vault in the world.


The cat's eye gem is a spherical piece of pure mint green emerald with a small piece of carbon black obsidian in the centre, and is one of the rarest gems on earth. I didn't know how to react, I was gobsmacked. If they could get into the most secure vault in the world, imagine what they could do to a normal bank.


For the next 5 hours I was trying to figure out how they did it. After that I had a cup of black coffee and a tuna sandwich. I ended up trying to find out how they did it all night, or what I thought.


When I woke up it was still dark. Suddenly I heard a large thud. I ran outside. There was nothing there. I ran over to my neighbour to ask him if he had heard it. I knocked on the door. There was no answer. I ran past my work building and oddly the top floor light was on. I went inside. I took the elevator to the top. I saw my boss Mr Ned Curryer holding the cat's eye gem. Accidently I knocked the table, he saw me, he took out a magnum. I ran for the stairs, I just got there. I was sprinting down the stairs while he rapidly fired his gun. It missed. I got out of the building, he was still firing.


I kept running, he still fired at me. I was on a chase for quite long. Finally he fired and it hit me in the back of the head and everything went black.




 

The scary experience

      

As a plate smashed to the floor,the precious misty beige coloured plate shattered into pieces. Blythe woke up in shock!She looked around but it was silent and no one was to be seen,she pulled her cosy duvet over her head,shut her eyes and tried to go to sleep but just then SMASH! Blythe realised that this wasn't.

Blythe stumbled down the rickety stairs and looked in the kitchen there was
cups,plates,mugs and saucers everywhere but because it was really late
she did not realise anything all blythe did she went straight to bed.

The next crisp morning ,Blythe woke up again but this time it was by the scream of her mother! Blythe suddenly noticed her dad's foot steps scampering down the stairs she instantly jumped out of her snuggly bed and sprinted back down the creaky stairs as soon as she made it to the kitchen she came two a hult her beautiful ocean blue eyes bulged with fear because there on the wall was you will pay !

Blythes mother Tina was in her own pool of tears she was terrified but in the snap of the fingers Blythes father Peter had a brilliant idea!Tina knew someone that worked for the n.y.p.d (which stands for new york police department ) Tina stood up grabbed the car keys,glanced at the door and then shot to the vermilion colored door hoped in the car and sped off into the distance to the n.y.p.d like a lion trying to catch its prey.


Meanwhile,Peter and blythe were watching a programe called the fishing adventure!


Tina ran into the living room and described how that the person that threatened us was a man called Edward Dooley he is very very sensitive man and believe it or not he did it because when we were in nursery together i grabbed his apple and through it in the sand pit, but it doesn't matter now he got sent to prison for two years for threatening a family.Peter said that lets just clear our heads and just forget about it ok Blythe agreed and they all live until this day and yes Tina did manage to get the writing of the wall.    

Zombie Apocalypse


It was a quiet, peaceful day in the south of New York City. Lorenzo was confused because it was a Monday morning and nobody could be seen as far as the eye could see. As usual Lorenzo was zooming around on his futuristic jetpack, which needed to be charged. He saw his favourite cafe, which he knew had a jetpack charging station.


The shop's owner came to the door and asked Lorenzo if he'd seen anyone on the streets. Lorenzo said"no" Mario,the shop's owner, replied "That's unusual." Lorenzo charged up his jetpack. Mario got his jetpack out. Finally they went next door and saw  a man who was grey and had a limp and suddenly realised that he was a zombie.


They flew back to Lorenzo’s island base in the northern district of Manhattan. They equipped their specialist weapons and went back to the shop.  In a matter of two seconds the zombie was turned to dust.


Lorenzo soon realised that their was more than one zombie. Lorenzo told Mario about this. They mounted their jetpacks and took off for Rio de Janeiro.  Surely the zombie apocalypse wouldn’t of spread their already. They were flying over Orlando when Mario’s jetpack started beeping, it was low on FUEL!


In Orlando it was busy they found a charging station which they left their jetpacks at. They went off to the amusements. Mario and Lorenzo were playing Minecraft…


They soon realised that it was becoming night in their world.  They only had Iron swords and nothing else.  The Zombies attacked them Mario died but Lorenzo ran. Lorenzo realised that running was good he asked Mario how he was doing?  A sudden silence evaded the air around them.


Lorenzo looked round and saw Mario dead as a doorknob.  Lorenzo got his specialist zombie destroyer and paced around the room, outside he heard a mass of screams the holiday-makers were in trouble the brave Lorenzo went outside and started blasting zombies but they overpowered him and he called the zombie busters for help because his designer suit got dirty.


He loaded his jetpack and took off he saw the candyfloss like clouds form Lorenzo. Orlando had transformed from the bright holiday resort with tan coloured beaches  to having green infected water and dark gloomy skies.


He thought about going to the lovely, peaceful island of Tenerife. That would be a good place a voice said; it was his old friend Mario, who had sadly died in Orlando.


A island emerged through misty clouds it was his destination. He could see the historic Volcano with it’s rocky climbs, and smooth drops. He headed for the Jungle Water coloured trees.


Lorenzo had reached his destination he pulled out his automatic house constructor. His house was deep into the grand oak wood trees. It consisted of an underground testing chamber, above the ground was the living quarters. Over the next few days Lorenzo had been building a zombie destroying machine. He had saved the world Yes!

THE END
                                                                     Zombie Apocalypse
Just as Harry woke up in his suit, he noticed that there wasn't any noise from outside. So he decided to take a ride around town on his motorbike. He stopped at a friends house and called  "Hello is anyone home ?" There came no reply, he called again but this time there came a "grawl" Then the thing approached Harry and then he saw a zombie coming for him. He was petrified!

When  he got home he saw Ben with a shotgun in his hand waiting for zombies. The mansion that he was in was ten stories high with a underground base if it blew up. From far away the mansion stood out in the bland city like a lion in a heard of rhinos. When you get closer you see a Sahara sand  bookshelf .If you take out a grey book the bookshelf will turn around and reveal a secret room full of pistols, shotguns, miniguns, cutlasses and armor.

 They equipped all of the gadgets. By then all of the zombies had surrounded the mansion when Harry and Ben got to the ground floor. They started to shoot all of the zombies but Ben got bitten and mutated into a zombie. Then Harry killed him and took all of his amour and weapons.

Harry is now on his own and quickly locks up the mansion. He shoots off in his SSC Ultimate Aero II to the CDC to see how to stop the zombie apocalypse. At the CDC he finds a new teammate called Ned. They put on some more amour and go outside to kill some more zombies .

They travel to an island to prepare themselves for the apocalypse. Once they got there they trained for four years. When they got back the zombies had took over the city. Then Ned got on a roof and shot the king zombie in the eye, mouth, neck and forehead but he didn't die. Then Ned shot the king in the brain. Then Ned picked up the crown and became the king and he wanted the zombies to stop attacking us. But they wanted to kill Ned he jumped into his SSC Ultimate Aero II and sped off to the mansion with Harry.

When they got to the mansion they went into the basement to hide from the zombies and plan their attack. The zombies were deciding who would be their leader, they finally decided on a fat one. Harry and Ned were ready to attack. They jumped out of the basement and started to attack the
zombies.

Then Harry mutated into a zombie. As soon as that happened Ned fled the scene and came back in a aeroplane and started to shoot the zombies, but that didn't work. He noticed he had a atomic bomb in the hull of the plane and dropped it down to destroy the zombies. It worked! All of the zombies were killed in the blast.

                                                THE END         


                                          From Ryan Hignett        

100 word challenge by Amy

Happy Character Description

Have you ever met someone who’s always on a high? Well Matt Hanger is just that sort of person. When he springs into the air, his silky jet black hair goes wild. When he spins in circles, his emerald green eyes search to find you in the blur of his twisting world. Matt and his friends often go to the forest. You would be lucky to see them before they run into the shadows of the worn forest trees. But the best thing about Matt, is that he always has a wide grin on his face, wanting to have fun.

A cheesy situation By Kate

“Now get out! And STAY OUT!!!”
With one last longing look at the cheese board sitting on the kitchen table, I was hustled out of the door with one swipe of the broom. BANG!  Went the door. I sighed. Why did humans never like us? To take my mind off it, I dreamt about heaven. Cheese heaven.

Obviously it was never going to come true, but even so, I kept on dreaming. I dreamt of my house, cheese walls, cheese floors, cheese ceiling. Hard cheese for nibbling on, and soft cheese for scooping up with both paws. Suddenly I snapped out of my dream because a line of drool dribbled out of my mouth and splashed onto my paw in the most off-putting way.
As you probably have realised, I love cheese. Actually, that’s an understatement. I am the best cheese lover IN THE WORLD!!!!!

Anyway, away from the cheese and on to me. I’m a mouse and, as I said, the biggest cheese lover in the world. My name is Jean. Yes, I’m French and yes, I have a moustache and a beret. I just can’t get enough of that stuff the colour of daffodils……..Oh, sorry, I’m slavering on the page again!

I’m never going to get enough to eat tonight. There’s only one place I know. I hate going there. The muddy sludge leaks into the drain which is old with rust. The gutter pipe leaks creating a puddle the colour of dishwater. It is always dark as it has no windows and so it seems the size of a cupboard. Spider webs lurk in every corner and sometimes so do their owners, waiting to gobble up an innocent fly at every chance they got.

This damp, dark, musty place was under the pavement, in the drain. It wasn’t that wet, only when it had been raining. I knew it hadn’t tonight, so I decided to go along. And I was in luck. Someone had thrown a cardboard box with a fresh cheese burger on the pavement! It must have been blown into the drain by the wind!

Well, I’ve just come back from my dinner and, I have to say, it’s been the best for a long time. I never usually go for fast food, but this time it was a winner. I’ll write again in the morning, but for now I have to sleep on the cold, hard pavement. Yuck!

Okay, so I’ll explain why I’m in a cage at the vet.
I trekked into the woods for more scavenging, when I saw heaven. Was it heaven? Or was it not? A picnic blanket laden with CHEESE. All sorts. I had reached the middle plate of camembert when it hit me. Literally. Some humans found me gazing at their lunch, and threw a hard cheddar block at my head. It made cheesy fireworks, the cheese sprinkling like confetti around me.
I took the chance and grabbed.

So I guess it turned out okay……..

Joe's 500 word challenge

Apocalyptic liberty city


My earliest memories are of me and my family leading a very happy life. It’s all gone now, I have no home and no family, I just wander where the world lets me.


We were all happy until it hit; families torn apart, my family. The risk’s you take are extreme. Many don’t give their name. When you go out for a food and supplies run with your group anything can happen. I saw my brother get relentlessly fed upon by ZOMBIES! I can never look at them the same way it sickens me; I despise them.


Recently I found a prison safe and secure. I found two people when I was cleaning the corpses out of cell block D, their names were Alfie and Jack. They had food but they were still strangers in this depleting universe. All of sudden Jack jumped up and tried to hit me over the head with a withered snapped-in-half cricket bat, I dodged it and hit him at such shocking speed and he fell to the floor dead as a doornail. As I said they’re all strangers.


Vehicles, so important for getting around: you want something strong and that will get through hordes. It
could even help to make a plough on the front from scrap metal. It is important if it stop’s for any reason get out and run, do not stop for anything; I learned that the hard way.


Zombies are attracted to noise. When I went out to get supplies with Alfie and he shot a harmless zombie crawling in the one field of luscious emerald grass causing  child zombies to crawl eerily out of the tunnels sprinting off the swings soon the roads filled up we were trapped.


Luckily we took the armoured truck that day and we made it back on the scarce fuel we had.


We had to pick zombies off the fence going for their head - that is the only part on a zombie that will affect them. It’s weird looking in their eyes again you almost believe they are still human. I’ve lost many people.


I lost my mother to the virus, praying and screaming into the night, stalking for its next victim. If anyone you know falls ill they would want you to put them out of their misery, so for their sake just do it if you love them.


The double tap rule. Me and Alfie made a rule to make sure we don't get hurt you have to, with any weapon, hit or shoot them twice because anything can happen.


Finally we found some resources: five sawed off shot guns and seven AK47’s, we really hit the jackpot when we bumped into the decaying baby-blue coloured shop, we got enough to feed us for weeks and now we know where to go for more food.


This is my story, this is what happens in my life. I am the last survivor, I am the ultimate; I am Joe.







My trip to the moon!

I always wondered what it felt like to walk on the moon,when I was ten years old almost eleven,I thought the moon was a giant Baby bell! Coming from a poor background I never went any where apart from school, home and the local super market.

When night fell, and everyone was asleep I crept out of my broken, wooden bed to the window. I would peer through the curtains wanting and wanting to be there my self. Every birthday that was my one wish. Then one day it happened.

Lets go forwards seven years. As I herd the crash of the letter box crash against the door, I ran down the old, wooden stairs. As I picked up the letter I realised it was from the coconut space station. My heart raced the letter said Miss Charlie Smith and my address as I opened the important letter it said I had an invitation to fly to the moon!

My training took three years, so I was twenty when I could for fill my dream. Four weeks after the letter was delivered Miss Charlie Smith, me, was of to America. Know one knew how long I’d be, terns out I was seven years. I missed my family terribly, every night I thought to my self is the moon really a giant Baby bell.

“ Five, Four, Three, Two, One, Zero lift of!” the loud speakers boomed,
 “This is what I wished for and it came true, don’t be scared!” Suddenly I realised I was thinking out loud opps!

I am going to land on the giant baby bell I mean the moon in less than ten seconds “ nine, eight, I cant wait, four, three, two, one, zero! I’m on the moon!” I screamed. As I took my first step on the moon I realised the moon is not a giant baby bell in fact it is a , wait for it drum roll please, this is a story I know but any way, it’s a giant Victoria sponge.

As you all know, as we live on the moon now, the moon is extremely tasty. If you dig into the centre of the moon it is full of butter cream and jam. If you think that’s wired then you obviously haven’t met the marshmallow monsters. The aliens of the moon, don’t worry there harmless, I think but anyway the moon is made of cake.

As I stared at the deserted moon noticing every sprinkle crater, wondering if I’ve uncovered the truth of the moon. As I walked further and further , I noticed tiny white specks which looked like salt or sugar. Then I noticed it was icing sugar.

The colour of the moon was Hawaiian sand pale and white. As I peered over the edge of the moon the clouds floated gracefully ready to give you a hug

100 word challenge by Amy

100 word challenge 

Lucy Whiting. She never liked to play with other people. As her ocean blue eyes turned to look at the midnight sky, a shimmering tear drop rolled down her face. Someone in the distance was laughing at her, telling his friends she was weird. The pain was like a monster pushing through the crusty earth. He was right. She was just a mysterious ten year old girl whose parents were killed in a car crash three years ago. Her heart sank to the bottom of her stomach. Lucy felt alone, as she sat in the dusty corner of the park.

Wednesday 5 February 2014

Samuel Crompton was the best inventor

Samuel Crompton, despite his humble background, made a significant contribution to spinning with a revolutionary invention which changed the world. [SWIFT]

After his father passed away, Samuel Crompton's family struggled for money. Therefore every night, he had to soulfully play the violin to earn money, whilst working in a weaving factory during the day. However, he was determined to persevere and care for his beloved family and endeavoured to develop his product in the face of these hardships. [KESTREL with some HERON]

He may not have had enough money to get the patent, but companies stole the idea and eventually 4 - 5 million machines were sold. Robert Peel commented, "This invention will revolutionise this industry world wide." Once the rest of parliament heard of this, they gave him £5000 because this invention made cities like Manchester rich, contributing to the success of the nation. [HERON]

Samuel Crompton was very determined and never gave up even though he was quite poor. He invested all his own money into the invention and travelled far and wide to share his idea. Despite many set backs, he continued to set up businesses with the money he earned but unfortunately they did not succeed. [SWIFT]

Even though he came from a humble background, he never gave up. Maybe this is why he got so far in life and explains why he is the best inventor ever. [HERON]

High Level Debate

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