I was in a mud patch and looking behind me I saw beautiful
butterfly eating teddy gum drops from a basket on a lovely fluffy pink unicorns
back. It was sprinting from a nose dripping troll. I saw it and instantly
jumped into a bush. The leaves crackled. However it heard me and jumped into
the bush. The troll hit me and gobbled me up. I only jut got through all the
snot and bogeys. The unicorn cried and cried itself to death. The butterfly
flew away but it turned back to keep the memories of me.
very creative but sad for the unicorn!
ReplyDeleteWhat a very surreal picture! You have a very vivid imagination.
ReplyDeleteI like your description, including excellent use of verbs. I also like 'instantly' and your use of a short sentence.
Well done, Mal
What an interesting story! You have a very creative mind, Mal. Great descriptions of the unicorn and the troll. I love the last line about the butterfly turning back to keep the memories. Very poetic. Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteWhat a creative story Mal! Very good descriptions of the unicorn and the troll. I love the line about the butterfly turning back for the memories, it's very poetic. Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteRachael