Suddenly, the boy jumped out
of the field where the bull was and then the noise stopped…
The aliens had realised that
if they were going to catch the boy the aliens, who are controlled by a boy who
was playing a prank, would have to go down onto the Earth and abduct the boy into
their spacecraft. But before they could they’d have to come up with an ingenious
plan.
Some of the more knowledgeable
aliens in the voyage came up with a great idea that they could mind wash him into
coming up and then terminate the victim.
Wonderful story. I really enjoyed your word choices and excellent vocabulary. Knowledgeable aliens can be tricky especially when they want to terminate you. I would suggest that you read your post aloud and see if you can add some commas or other punctuation to make it easier for your audience to read it and get the full impact of your excellent words.
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