Thursday, 10 May 2012

Sindy N Yr 6 at Brundall School


With a blink of an eye, stars filled the sky. It was peaceful and calm, until a deafening noise abrupted me; making me mortified of what to come.

I heard footsteps approaching me, closer and closer. As nearer it got, my heart danced a funny jive to a beating drum… thumping, thumping. What was it? I wondered.

“Help,” they screamed as I jumped up in shock “please help me!”
“Now what do I need?” I muttered to her, however it was too late. She sank to the ground, dripping her last tears-streaming down her face. What had just happened? 

3 comments:

  1. Amazing story loved it but how does the prompt come into this?

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  2. that was brilliant!

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  3. why thank you everybody and by the way its the third paragraph third line.

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