Friday, 18 May 2012

Jason's 100wc yr 6 week 31


As Tim and Moby peered though the bushes they saw something so amazing that they both fell back with a thud! This fabulous creature, with fur as soft as silk, yet a ruff and matted look from a distance had eyes like sapphires that glisten in the sun. Everything was so mouth-dropping, so eye-popping, yet they had not realised they had discovered… the Guineabear. A deadly hunter, that if you get on the wrong side of you will most likely die. So what will they do, risk it or turn back?            

2 comments:

  1. It is the dreaded Guineabear

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  2. Oh my goodness Jason! What a cliff hanger to leave for your readers. I'm sure the Brain Pop team will want to answer this question. Thank you so much for writing for the 100WC!

    Mrs Skinner

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