Tim and Moby headed for the oasis, in the middle of the
jungle. They where going for days until they finally arrived, “At last Moby,
we are here “exclaimed Tim. With a sudden bang a monkey came swigging in and
stole Tim’s hat Moby tried to grab it but he failed and plummeted with a bang. They
decided to look around for the monkey tribe.
Finally they came
across the monkeys, Tim climbed up the tree and grabbed the hat off the monkey however
they had now lost the oasis and had to go thorough the pain again.
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ReplyDeleteLoved your word oasis it sounds beautiful but to me you used slightly to much of it and other things yet I stilled enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeletethis is good but you need to check your spellings:) where - were:)
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