Suddenly,
we came across a mysterious creature; it had strange pointy ears, big bold emerald
eyes. It also had a very tall figure- nine foot five to be precise. They’re hair
was all old and withered, thin, dying hair, ready to have a good comb!
Whilst
I was walking by it I was absolutely petrified, I was so worried they might
grab me into their own little world although it may be good to explore a whole
new place. Luckily I survived but when I looked behind I no longer saw anyone I
was with…
Great adjectives charlotte
ReplyDeleteI love your openers they were amazing I got a bit lost on the describing of the hair but overall it was astonishing!
ReplyDeletereally good charlottee i like how you have described the creature:) xx
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