The marvellous pink panther flew over the castle noisily but
all of a sudden he was getting shot at but he didn’t have any pretention the reason
he was getting shot at was because he was whacking up the castle’s village.
So the marvellous pink panther braked then he went under the
ship and broke the ship in half. All of a sudden he whizzed of to his lair
which is in a huge rock; it has all the latest gadgets.
They have bough they best worries to destroy the pink
panther they blow the rock up and the pink panther die sadly.
Hello, I really enjoyed reading your 100WC entry! The use of adjectives in your description helps the reader imagined the pink panther in their minds which is great. I also like all the drama in your writing, lots going on! Keep up the good work.
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