The 100 word challenge
…now what do I need…
Now what do I need, I’ve got
all the things I need, apart from a knife.
“Why do you need a knife “, exclaimed
Marika;
“Well, I need a knife because
we’re making cookies later,” said Alish.
A few days past and no-one did
no cooking at all – unfortualy .However Alish never did use the knife .Marika asked.”Why
haven’t we done any cooking?” Alish didn’t say anything as normal anyway.
Marika finally got to make
cookies in the end after all that time waiting and waiting all that time.
Marika was happy that finally
got cooking again.
cookies! yum!
ReplyDeleteomnomnom, its really good casey,
ReplyDeletealthough im not the first 2 sentences in the 2nd paragraph work together because with "however" you usually have to say something good and something bad after (or the other way). so you could say however alish did use the knife. but other than that its really good
Hi Casey,
ReplyDeleteA story about cookies is always going to be a good one! Well done! I'd recommend reading your work aloud after you have typed it because this will help you spot small errors in punctuation and spelling.
Keep up the good work.
Liz Goddard Team100WC