Thursday, 18 July 2013
Sophie's 100wc
The doctor told me but he needn't have, because the monitor of my mothers heart rate was beeping constantly.
This was the moment I dreaded. That was then, I wondered what I would do without her. But then, just then, I realised that i could do nothing about her death either.
She was motionless. Tears trickled down my desrought face. My heart shattered into one thousand pieces.
I clutched her hand in despair. She was 72, I knew she would die but i didn't expect it this early.
The next day was her funeral, I sobbed. As I went over to the coffin I slowly saw it opening by itself.
Just then a the same hand as my mother came out. What was happening?
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Wow, Sophie! What powerful writing! You have written very well about the emotions you felt, using lots of excellent vocabulary. There was quite a twist in the tale at the end too, when the hand came out of the coffin! Great writing.
ReplyDeleteBethan Davis (Team 100WC)