Thursday, 18 July 2013

100-WC By Thomas Devaney Brundall Primary School

The doctors expression told everything. I ( Jack) fell on the floor. Why did this have to happen.
My mum was no more...

I burst out the door. But I wondered what I would do. So I lay on the road. Suddenly in the corner of my eye an ambulance came towards me.

It swerved away from me into the hospital. What had I done.

I rushed in. The doctor who tried to save mum was on the floor. I jumped and pulled her out.

She lay there. Another motionless woman this time my fault. I now sat there all alone.

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