Thursday, 18 July 2013

100 word challenge by Shannon

Elly stopped and stared she looked at the hospital she was really shocked it was an inferno!

I ran in the hospital and looked left and right but I wondered where everyone was.

I opened the brown door then I saw a little girl she was sobbing and terrified! But I wondered what I would do.

Then I had a tremendous Idea! I thought because the little girl is really scared and crying I should take her outside so I  picked up the little girl and ran outside!


The fire people came and they got all the hose pipe out 

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