I always wondered what it felt like to walk on the moon,when
I was ten years old almost eleven,I thought the moon was a giant Baby bell!
Coming from a poor background I never went any where apart from school, home
and the local super market.
When night fell, and everyone was asleep I crept out of my
broken, wooden bed to the window. I would peer through the curtains wanting and
wanting to be there my self. Every birthday that was my one wish. Then one day
it happened.
Lets go forwards seven years. As I herd the crash of the
letter box crash against the door, I ran down the old, wooden stairs. As I
picked up the letter I realised it was from the coconut space station. My heart
raced the letter said Miss Charlie Smith and my address as I opened the
important letter it said I had an invitation to fly to the moon!
My training took three years, so I was twenty when I could
for fill my dream. Four weeks after the letter was delivered Miss Charlie
Smith, me, was of to America .
Know one knew how long I’d be, terns out I was seven years. I missed my family
terribly, every night I thought to my self is the moon really a giant Baby
bell.
“ Five, Four, Three, Two, One, Zero lift of!” the loud
speakers boomed,
“This is what I wished
for and it came true, don’t be scared!” Suddenly I realised I was thinking out
loud opps!
I am going to land on the giant baby bell I mean the moon in
less than ten seconds “ nine, eight, I cant wait, four, three, two, one, zero!
I’m on the moon!” I screamed. As I took my first step on the moon I realised
the moon is not a giant baby bell in fact it is a , wait for it drum roll
please, this is a story I know but any way, it’s a giant Victoria sponge.
As you all know, as we live on the moon now, the moon is extremely
tasty. If you dig into the centre of the moon it is full of butter cream and
jam. If you think that’s wired then you obviously haven’t met the marshmallow monsters.
The aliens of the moon, don’t worry there harmless, I think but anyway the moon
is made of cake.
As I stared at the deserted moon noticing every sprinkle crater,
wondering if I’ve uncovered the truth of the moon. As I walked further and
further , I noticed tiny white specks which looked like salt or sugar. Then I noticed
it was icing sugar.
very good
ReplyDeletein that paragraph where you count down i liked how it rymed
Are you writing about yourself going to the moon or someone else? Like Kate you have a great chance of being in the top 50!
ReplyDeleteFrom Ciara
I am writing as if it was a diary and it obviously is not a true story
Deletefrom Lauren
Good descriptions and a great idea!
ReplyDeletevery imaginative.... it was taking a well known saying and putting it into a brilliant, hilarious story!
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