As I entered the deep, dark forest I began hearing
strange noises. Slowly the sky got darker, my eyes seeing things. I started to
think I wasn’t alone. Who else could be here? Then a big shadow flew past but
no one was seen. My heart began to beat faster. I tried to scream for help but
my throat was to dry was I safe? I had a feeling someone was following me. To
sacred to turn around, I began to run. The feeling was worse than a nightmare.
Would I ever get out of this forest?
Really good and really descriptive .
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