So I decided to go to the shop. When I got there I noticed something in the corner of my eye...
Chocolate! Looking at all that chocolate was another boy as well. We both sprinted to get the last packet of chocolate...
I was so close but the kid barged me out the way and dumped it on the counter.Then the man asked
" 8 pounds please.", and then the kid slumped on the floor in distraught. He didn't have enough money!
Thats a very good story! I like the words you used,such as distraught and barged.also i like the the saying 'the corner of my eye'.
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