Wednesday, 7 May 2014

BREAKING NEWS! Buzzy the buzzing

bee has died. Buzzy’s death has left people destroy. The funeral will take place in ireland. when scientist found her they were overwhelmed to find such a rare species. Buzzys children and husband said we will miss buzzy and hope that she will have a good afterlife. we have  just had some news come in about how she died scientist believe it was caused by a heart attack.
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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous8 May 2014 at 09:20

    Very good.

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  2. Anonymous8 May 2014 at 09:31

    Good languege

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  3. Anonymous8 May 2014 at 09:32

    I like the start very much but you forgot a capital letter.

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  4. Anonymous2 June 2014 at 09:37

    i like the start

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  5. Anonymous2 June 2014 at 09:38

    good
    need a capital letter at the start

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  6. Anonymous4 June 2014 at 09:30

    Its sad but also it has good description

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  7. Anonymous23 June 2014 at 09:25

    i like your description and its very good

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  8. Anonymous25 June 2014 at 09:31

    Good description and very good story

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  9. Anonymous25 June 2014 at 09:36

    Some Of It Doesn't Make Sense But Its Good Otherwise

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  10. Anonymous25 June 2014 at 09:37

    First Comment...Oh um 10th comment

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