The mysterious forest
As I walked into the forest
all I could hear was birds singing, Waves clashing and the beautiful sound of
leaves crumbling as I walked further in.
When I reached half way I saw
a ragged up bench, There were pieces of sharp wood pointing up like sharp shiny
diamonds from it, I would not dare to sit down.
Suddenly I knew I wasn't alone, I stopped moving but leaves were still crunching. I stared around the
forest but again there was still no sing of anyone.
Blood was pouring down my
leg, They grabbed me and took me away…
It was amasing
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ReplyDeletethat was really good and i liked how you described every thing
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good adjectives:
crunching leaves
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