“Mum, Mum, Mum!” I screeched as I saw a spider as big as my
hand crawling on my bed. I waited for a reply but none came. I waited some more
but still nothing. I ran to mum but all I found were shreds and blood all over
the floor.
I started running to the spider but as I reached my door I
found my bed covered with blood and my mum’s body.
I hear a hissing from behind me I would spin on my heels but
that’s when it bit me and suddenly the pain in my arm thrashed.
Hi Sam, what a gruesome 100WC!
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# Maybe describing the spider in more detail would help your readers understand why it was so scary.
Well done and keep writing. :)