One day I was strolling back from cave school and I felt a
sharp pain on the back of my neck and reached around, what I saw made my spine
shiver. It was lava. I span 180°, looking behind me I saw a volcano growing in
front of my eyes.
The lava spitting protrusion
left me with no choice ;I had to run…
When I got a safe distance away I stopped and stood still,
thinking, “was I dreaming.”
Anxiously, I ventured back and to my surprise the volcano was gone. There was no trace
except a lonely lump of pumice.
Hi Sam.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your 100WC. You have a fantastic imagination. Well done for using the correct punctuation.
Well done!
Miss Kitching (Team 100WC)
An excellent piece of writing. I particularly love the phrase 'the lava spitting protrusion'. How mysterious that it was there one minute and gone the next. I was also very impressed that you clearly understood that pumice comes from volcanoes. Good work, Sam!
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